wow pretty good, well written, i like it, legato was my fave, and still is, hope u write more stuff like this...

Ahaha! I like very much! You're a pretty good author yourself, you know? Truly descriptive, and have a good narrative flair. KEEP WRITING! Not only is this story so good, it's also about my two greatest heart's desires...Knives, my hot massively genocidal drug...and Legato, whom I apparently am in a Trigun personality quiz I took...fascinating...

Ahem, lol...I'm waiting for more chapters!

Okies, so after reading over this, I noticed a lot of typos and screw ups that I skipped over before. Sowwies! *bows apologetically* I'll fix all of them as soon as I can figure out how to work the Edit Story thing-o...Oro @.@...Microsoft word hates my guts...*cries a river**drowns in it* Modern technolody defeats me!

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