Aw Ollie writing poetry is cute. He is lucky it wasn't Snape who caught him. Always knew McGonagall was a softie at heart.

WOW O_O You WROTE that? I'm still on the beginner's level! XD

BRILLIANT! LOVED IT! I have a mental image of Percy and OLiver kissing in my head whilst reading this and it was really cute. Aren't they adorable? :)

*Adds to faves*

That was great! I especially liked the way you ended that!

AWW! I loved it! And I liked McG's line at the end. ::giggles::

McGonagall rytheming*shiver* Scary...

nice ending! needs more

Oh Man! Is Percy dead in this one too? I hope not...beautiful poem, though. I love the way you compared Percy's eyes to the oceans...and I liked McGonagall's reaction to it. :)

That was cute! Write a lemon or summtin to go with it, .

It's okay...but...Oliver and Percy are in the same year.

*glomps Djinn* I love you, like always ;) I think this is absolutely gorgeous, who said jocks couldn't write poetry - corny poetry, even? You have Oliver down perfectly, including his great taste in Prefects :)

Oh... how CUTE! I love it! The poetry is good- reminds me of Shakespeare (and I love his works...well, most of the ones I've read) McGonagall is so awesome! I wonder if she writes spapy love poetry when she's supposed to be figuring out what she's going to teach next week...

Oliver writing love poetry! Cute! Er..."Thee, my Percy's beer?" "Thee, my Percy - don't sneer?" "Thee, my Percoset's here?" "Thee, my Percy - I leer?" "Thee, my Perce without peer?" "Thee, my Percy's cute rear?" ... ah well... I liked Prof. M.'s reaction too!

Nice one! The poetry was pretty good, and the ending was funny.

:)