Oh my god! That was amazing! XD And Im not really one to watch pokemon, but that was just awesome! The way you took it away from the kids version of the show and showed the kind of behind-the-scenes version of Team Rocket was very creative! I loved this! D

Awww! I almost cried...!

I loved it. You had me in tears 3

Beautiful. That's all I can say.

Oh God, that was the most emotional story ever! D: You got me crying. It was very, very beautiful; I totally loved it! Thank you for writing this. )

So bittersweet. ;;

Oh, beautiful! I was very wary when I came across this story, because usually suicide stories tend to be over done and completely ooc, but this one was wonderful! I could almost feel James' pain

Okay, this fic wasn't as good as I thought it would be, so I'm going to offer my honest opinion in the hopes that you fix this fic.

The truth is, James wouldn't even have the guts to commit suicide anyway. He's just your average wimpy guy with a soft spot for bottlecaps. So this fic, although good in a heart-wrenching way, is not as accurate as you claim it to be. And also, I find the fact that the story goes from angst and near tragedy with James wanting to kill himself to passion and love the very next day kinda cheesy and overrated. But I'm not flaming, just saying. So hope you take this into consideration before you write another story.

Regards,

iblueup

I remember reading that fic a long time ago, it bring back memories from my old obsession over Team Rocket. Even if it's full of angst and it's a bit OOC, I love the story and the writing style.

Very emotional and good story. It represents everyday troubles in life. A great story.

that was very well written! I loved it! But, you haven't updated for 8 years?

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

for the love of mike, dude!(or dudette) you know, I kinda see more of a Romance/Angst thing for this. Romance/Tragedy if somebody had died. yeez...

Really serious stuff, but you made it so enjoyable. D Poor James ( I'm glad Jessie was able to stop him commiting suicide, and that they finally got together. Great stuff! Enjoyed every moment I spent reading this!

That was a very nice fic, seriously made me cry. However I wonder where Meowth is. :)