such a good story! i loved it to the end.

That was such a beautiful story! (Of course, which of Anna's stories aren't? _) I love how Jessie and James's love for each other always manages to see them through the bad times!

Jeez, whats with all the depression fics?

I feel like such a total LOSER right now. I realize that I was being very biased in my ealier comments, and apologize. (Anna, please check your e-mail).

This is the author. (again) ::sighs:: The idea was not to jump from suicide to romance, it was to show two people, confronted with the fear of losing each other, and the after affects caused from that fear of loss. I agree that each part of a story should serve a purpose, which the scene in question did. Of course I like to improve my work, (Who doesn't?) but downing a scene stating that you're "innocent to that sort of thing" is NOT constructive!

Sorry. I wasn't saying it was a bad story, I was just giving opinions about what I liked and didn't. You can't have people gushing over your work and going "Oh, it's so wonderful" all the time, I don't get that all the time and when I do, I actually get pretty sick of it (I want to actually improve my work).

I can take some things, but it doesn't mean I have to like them. I don't like total bloodfests either, I don't want to give the wrong impression on that. Everything in a story should serve a purpose...I just find it difficult to believe that things can switch from suicidal musings to the sweet ecstasy of romance as quickly as they did.

I'm not saying that I didn't like the story, I did, I really did.

Sorry that I offended. *cries*

This is the author. Before anyone else comments on the "adult" scene in Shattered Soul, I am going to state here and now that I find nothing wrong with acts of physical love between two people who love each other. I much prefer love and procreation as oppossed to excessive profanity and violence, and I do not write tragidies. I don't like stories with unhappy endings, real life can be depressing enough. This fic has an "R" rating, and is not intended for small children, so if you're going to read it than GROW UP! I refuse to water down something I worked very hard on and intended to be as realistic as possible.

Well written story! Now, I must say that it got a little sappy at the end. And I didn't like that...um...you-know-what scene, er-HEM! I'm...a...kinda innocent about that sort of thing...and I like stories that are innocent too. I can take violence (heck, I write a lot of it into my own stories), even cussing...but...The first parts, delving into James' anguish, were good, and I liked the way you tied it into some of his comments on actual episodes of the show.

When reading, I was thinking that in the end, that they would find Meowth commited suicide (weird way my mind works). Glad it didn't turn out like I expected. All in all 6/10.

Now THAT was a good story! Actaully, I think all your stories are good. I'm SO happy you didn't kill James! I woulda cried my eyes out!

That was an interesting story, i dont know what to say about it, but i liked it.

Awsome story you need a sequil

Oh My God! This was the most sad and beautiful and wonderful story I have read in a long, looong time! It actually made my eyes water, and that is not a small achievement, I'll tell you that! This was a true Masterpiece, a one in a million story! In fact, this language is not enough to fully describe how much I loved it! Write more stories like this one, please! (15)

THAT WAS SOOOOO SWEET! I loved it! You should do a second part!

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Quite good. Can't really picture James commiting suicide though.