I knew checking everyone in a while would pay off!! Im way happy you added another chapter!! I never gave up on checking once in a while :)

This is absolutly the best story that I have read. It is written amazingy. So beautifly that I confinded myself to eight hours of reading it, only to collapse since it was seven in the morning. I cannot wait to read more of what you have planned for this story. I found it in a google image search, strangly. Then was led to geosite. One that I have never been to. Then was redirected here. I am so glad to have found a place to thank you for writing this, and showing it.

I aplogise if my review seems small, but I'm using an iPod Touch, and it is ever so hard to type. Plus it's four in the morning...

Can't wait for an update!

~Aavi

Wow ! An update ! I waited for so long ! I remember the first time I read your story, I stayed up until 4 in the morning, just because I was an addict ^^ I love your writing style, and I've read most of your stories, but my favorite is and will always be this one ! You have a way of talking about Hyrule in a very mature way, giving this place a seriousness, a deep history and making it quite realistic (well, not really realistic, since that's a fantasy universe, but... let's say coherent and well thought !). And I'm very fond of the way you describe the characters and their emotions, especially the relationship between Link and Veil !

Thank you so much for this new chapter ! Thank you thank you thank you thank you !

Another one ? Thank you !

By the way, I'm french, so sorry if my review was full of nonsenses ! I hope at least it was understandable ^^

I love this fic. Please don't leave it hanging like this.

More please? :)

OMG! this tory rox! Sheik, er, i mean Ilya, is supposed to be king! awesome! update soon! S'IL VOUS PLAIT! (please!)

One of the most beautiful stories ever! I'm very touched by Veil's love for Link, yet I'm also moved by Sheik's willingness to go all the way out for the both of them, so supportive of Veil and protective of Link. Somehow I feel he deserves a special place among them too... tho that's just me, probably. But I just love the chapters with them together traveling! Wherever this story goes, I'm sure the characters will flesh out well. Hope to see an update soon! :)

My God, this is absolutely one of the best and most epic Zelda fanfics out there. I'm at lost for words of praise... first of all, I /love/ your characterization of Link, Veil/Dark, and especially Sheik. There's not enough Sheik out there with enough machoness yet have grace and witty humor like the one in here.

At first I didn't know what to make of this rather newborn-like Veil, but you developed him so realistically into a strong and likable character, that he easily warmed up to me. His sheer devotion to Link is such a heartthrob... Chapter 18 made me cry so badly. I also like the implicit Sheik/Link lurking here and there.

I love the intense, very *human* emotions throughout the fic, along with the metaphors about life, original theories of 'soul shadow', and twists in the history between Hylians and Sheikahs. This fic is amazing. No doubt. It has been 3 years since this is updated, and like everyone else I'm *dying* to read the next installment for Veil/Link journey and Sheik's claim to the throne. (I await when the three unite, because their chemistry in this fic is so *fun*)

Your story was much better than I had expected. I actually believe that if you could switch names a tad, and places; this could easily become a very popular book. I thought that my writing was good, but by reading anything of yours, I have been sorely mistaken. I have actually begun to worship you that the pages of hard work that you portray to us all. You are a genius in every sense of the word, and my Dark Link and Link story, Hailing Darkness, pales in comparison to this work of art. You did very well, and out of the entire story, I could only place a few errors, unlike mine, where I’m far too lazy to even edit it. Veil is done so wonderfully that it makes my Nyct only seem like a storybook character, and Veil would be the real thing. The whole idea of the Shikara past, and documentation, and the whole soul shadow theory could actually be seen as something real in the series of Zelda Legends.

I do hope that perhaps you could read my story, and give me your thoughts on what should be changed and what looks good, because for now, your opinion is all that matters to me.

Gya!
First chapter and I already love your story!

This is a wonderful story!!

you need to rise from the dead and finish it I beg you! I fear I will die shortly if i can't read the rest of this magnifacent story! *being a bit over dramtic*

it kinda is mortifying that you haven't updated it in 3 years though... considering you said you would most deffenately finish all storys at some point... and to think you would stretch this 'point' through 3 years seems s a little unlikely... which kinda worries me about your actual wellbeing...

WONDERFUL series, just an excellent fic in every possibly way. I noticed on that it's been more than three years since you last updated, and that makes me sad, since it dramatically reduces any chance of my seeing the end to this story. T_T

I stumbled upon this fanfic just before I was going to go to bed last night, and ended up staying awake untill 1:30 to finish chapter 21. This is the best fanfic I have ever read and I hope that you continue the good work!

I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

...I can not for the life of me remember if I have read this before...Parts seem familliar, and there are even some that I can remember nearly word for word, but I just can't remember x.x

Still, it's a really good story. It's a different look at Darky--AKA Veil--and the overall plot seems interesting and well thought out. The plot has evolved since the beginning, moving away from a simple one dimension quest to one with many facets. I really wish you'll update this again. However, even f you don't, I'm still glad I was able to read it.