Good fic overall. I agree the ending took away a bit of the powerful imaginary too. And to the previous reviewer, silver is the 'holy element' supposed to purge things from evil, thus the author got that right.

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Is silver really holy? I had no idea that it was. I guess it makes sense though considering everything silver (like bullets and stakes) works against vampires and werewolves. I've just never thought about it though.
I thought you're ending was a bit weak and confusing. I had to read the last few sentances over twice to get it, but I still don't think I understand. I believe you're trying to get the reader to have that creepy "Whoa" feeling, but it's just not working for me.
Wow this is the first time I've really critisized you...don't hit me with the Frosted Flakes pleaze! --Grasshopper--