|Reviews for After the Fall|
| Nala 5/23/13 . chapter 59
These feelings...their crushing me:) such a great story. I'm soooo glad I found it and all of your work, it's all amazing!
| effect20 5/22/13 . chapter 58
Definitely caught the somewhere in between ref. Also to how zell finally said what needed to be said. Now on to the next chapter. Squall vs Laguna. Will squall finally cry or will Laguna faint. Bonding time!
| effect20 5/22/13 . chapter 57
Two rivials find common ground. Laguna being ...well Laguna. Rin snaps again. Another great chapter.
| effect20 5/21/13 . chapter 56
Seifer is his fishing partner! Lol lets just hope that's all they did a la broke back mountain. Just kidding. Something major seems to bother squall about this plan. I can't clue in on it though.
Is it me or did the chapters get shorter .
| effect20 5/21/13 . chapter 55
Squall with few good jokes in this one. But I'm surprised he didn't cower in a corner when rinoa blew up on him.
| Whatever41269 4/7/13 . chapter 87
Wow, Ashbear. I recently picked up reading this again. and... it's a bit of an epic. 87 chapters. And it's good stuff. One of these days i'll have to read it through from the start, because it's been over a year since i read the earlier chapters. Thanks for hours of entertainment. keep it up.
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 10
You... SHOT HIM?! NOOOOO!
Even I'm not that cruel! Oh wait... yeah I am :p
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 8
And I thought she'd turned down his proposal! 0.o
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 7
Three months passed already? Wow that was quick!
They are as bad as each other though, I must say. But the plot will develope, nice seeing interaction between Zone and Rinoa, even if it is sandwich related- Tuna Salad, YUMMY!
Moving onto the next chapter!
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 6
Love the little sexual reference up there- that's men for you haha! "Watch the sunrise naked." what a line XD
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 5
I am still waiting to see what the cause of their breakup was; you really don't give it up easily do you? XD
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 4
Ok I need to catch up on this; thought there would be an explaination in this chapter why things went sour!
Still loving the story and 83 more chapters til I'm on par with everyone else :)
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 3
A rival?! Please don't let me find out that Squall did move on or I'll throw cyber cookies at you!
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 2
Canon Squall as a squishy romantic! Never thought I'd see it! I hope I get to see more, no wonder I'm hooked on your writing!
| Rinny Leonheart 3/27/13 . chapter 1
You know I am almost sure I started this when you first wrote it, the plot looks so familiar to me. Well it has been nearly 10 years!
I will get you to 2k reviews Ashbear! Only 92 more to go XD