Nice story. I do hope you haven't abandoned it... Terrible cliff-hanger, doncha know...

I really love this story, and have been waiting for what seems like forever for you to update. If you are having issues with writers block, just call out to your fans and we'll try and help you get passed it. This really is a phenomenal idea that you have put together, and have pulled off spectacularly. Don't lay this aside and forget about it. I really wish to see where this goes. Please update soon.

Damn you for this cliffhanger! ;) Please, don't abandon this story.

The 'bad wine' was obviously poisioned

why haven't you updated in so long?!? this is such a great story it would be a pity to discontinue it...i hope you can find the time to work on it again. anyways good job with the story, the plot is wonderful and i loved the poison twist, and try to update soon, thanks!

I really find this fic very interesting. I know it has been a while since you updated it but I hope you do sometime soon.
It seems like a great piece.

Lisa

please continue the story
it is very interesting

update soon :D

i knew there was something in the wine!
love it update soon or else

i really like your story, the idea is a bit far fetched but you write it so well that one seem to forget that. really really great writing! i hope to read a new chapter soon!

I love this story, your a great writer, it's such an original idea. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

If your still doing this could please add some Daine in. I love where you are going its totally unique

Pure genuis

this is really good i likey. It's a lot different then all the other Alanna stories where she doesn't go to become a knight. I personnally like it better. I also like how you use latin it's something new. (did you know they do that in harry potter)
Well anyways i like it

This story is amazing and you are evil to leave it at such a cliffhanger. How could you? Please, please continue this.

*Gasp* poison! From Hunter into the wine! I did kinda expect it though. Nevertheless, this is a fantastic story, intricately detailed and mapped out. Alanna is all that I expected, and more. But I can't help but feel as if she doesn't quite belong. Like her position as Queen isn't something that she should really be doing - I agree with you there. Your writing is very accomplished and the political intrigues continue to drive your plot. It's interesting reading your incredibly original story. Looking forward to more updates ! ;)