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Reviews for: Something's Missing - Page 1 of 2
Aeflid
2006-08-25 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute XD Can't wait to see your sequel, whenever it is that you get the time ^_^
AvidReaderAlso
2006-08-05 . chapter 1
A very nice piece, and it stands alone quite well. Imagination fills in what might follow... ;) Good job.
wolflover
2005-09-06 . chapter 1
piz write more!
kerochan606
2005-08-10 . chapter 1
OMG, this was REALLY good! I can't believe that I didn't read this story sooner. Gomen. i'd like another chapter or sequel, but that's only if you've got the time. I understand if you don't, but oh well. We can wish, can't we? ^-^ Your works are really good. Keep up the astounding work of yours.
FireGoddess101
2005-06-16 . chapter 1
Good first chapter. Update please!
sam
2005-04-28 . chapter 1
i read the author's notes... i just think u should right a sequal/ nother chapter... because its a very good story.
P.S You cant make fun of me :)
Shinku Katana (not logged in)
2004-12-29 . chapter 1
Hi! This was great! It has potential to become a multi-chapter story if you choose to make it one. The song's "Broken" and the artists are Amy Lee and Seether. One of my many favs. And so is this fic. Good job!
Draco
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
I loved the story. It brings out the softer side of Seto. Also, very descriptive. I could hear and see all the surroundings from th story:)
Here4TheParty
2004-12-19 . chapter 1
LOVED it! *claps* VERY well written!
itoe-nakashima
2004-11-15 . chapter 1
Nice, I really liked it. It's a shame we can't expect a sequel or second chapter soon. I thought is was a real smooth, sweet little thing and I'm guessing the song is 'Broken', by Seether and Amy Lee? Oh well, I hope you get time to work on your stories... someday. But great work :)
Bunnydreamer200
2004-10-16 . chapter 1
Aw...as usual all of your fics are so cute and I can't help but squel at the thought of Seto and Anzu having a decent conversation and Kaiba opening up. Eep!

Write more soon ^_^
Ashe (Ashiri Seagren)
2004-10-15 . chapter 1
Oh-my-gosh-that-was-awesome!Very well done! That meeting was absolutly PERFECT! I loved the thought process that Seto went through! You kept everyone's character perfectly (which made me extremely happy!) while still changing them completely (I know that that makes no sense whatsoever, but I meant it as a huge compliment because you took every one's characters and kept their basic core, but developed each one to reflect their decisions and backgrounds that you created. It was so wonderfully done! Hmm . . . maybe I should have just said that in the first place!)! And some of the lines you came up with were beyond excellent! Very vivid and entertaining descriptions of both characters and setting. Smooth all the way through!
Watch out for those grammatical and spelling errors, though. I did find a few.
Well, if and when you ever do get around to writing a sequel, I will be throughly looking forward to it!
Nicole
2004-10-14 . chapter 1
Aw! That was sweet. Its strange how little things like coming together after years appart.
I really enjoyed it, great job. It was alot of information to get in such a short period of time but it worked since Tea is such a motor mouth. I approve! thanks for sharing.
CWolf2
2004-10-11 . chapter 1
The only thing that comes to my mind when I read this is "sweet". It was beautifully done.
peeps
2004-10-11 . chapter 1
This is great. I can't wait till the next update really looking forward to it.
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