Promised to review your other CCS fics, so here I am. Sorry to say this, but I'm not much for poetry... Especially structured poems. I like free verse a good deal more... Your poem was pretty good, though, considering how much it rhymed (I don't like rhyming) and it flowed pretty nicely. I still think it would've done better as a one shot short story from Tomoyo's POV, but that's just because I love those so much, and good ones are in short supply.

Have a nice day!

i like your villanelle miakoda, power of the moon. :) gawhd, those were always too confusing.. excellente!

I think its real good and I like it. Plus I love your "Anyone Other Than Me"!-

Nice poem your not that bad at all! You should try writing more of them. _ And even though I am not a TS fan, but an SS fan, I still like reading these kinds of poems. Like always very sad, but I like them that way. Do continue to write more poems! Keep up the great job. _

you are a really good poet! You bring out a hidden inner Tomoyo in this. Very good. Bravo!