Bravo! As always your vivid scene descriptions paired with antics make for a fun tale! Here's to the sequel!

Se-quel! Se-quel! (no pressure) :p

Much happier story overall than the first...I enjoyed both, can't wait to see what you have in mind for part three...Mowett Junior or Juniorette would be nice!

Yay! A lovely ending for a lovely story! Everyone is happy... for now anyway... though I know that's soon to change :P Which is a good thing! We can't let the boys get off too easy now can we? Haha and I love how Maddie cheers up Charlie with shopping. Charlie is such a girl.

Olivia: Oh.. shopping! Can I come?

Me: Liv, you hate Charlie.

Olivia: but I do enjoy shopping. Hey! Can we go shoe shopping tomorrow?

Tom: No!

Me: Hell no!

Olivia: (pouts)

Haha in case you haven't noticed I hate shopping... and I smell popcorn.. dude that smells good. Anyway, looking forward to the sequel! Your fast updates amazed me and I'm terribly looking forward to the next one for it sounds interesting! Until next time m'dear, keep writing!

Ah, what would my day be without a chapter from Miss Flossy? Looking forward to another sequel!

Whoo-hoo! Naughty stuff. At least they made up...and what did he mean by "trouble"? Could there be a bun in the oven already?

Stable boy: Whoa... dude... I wanna do that too!

Me: You aren't allowed. Peeping Tom.

Stable boy: My name's Mitch.

Me: Whatever. Go clean up horse poop or something.

Anyway, I'm happy they made-up and everything is happy again. For now. Will's bound to mess up again... Tom too... guys just do that. It's not their fault. I think it's in their genes. Just like how they can't multi-task either. One more chapter eh? Haha sequel? Aren't you just lovely? Go you!

Oh damn, now I can't wait for the sequel...or how this one will continue...you always keep me waiting for something ;)

*kicks Mowett in the arse* Jerk! Poor Maddie.

Haha Mowett best be crawling on his hands and knees to Maddie... once he's sober.

Olivia: Pshpt. He better have a really nice present too. He pretty much called her a slut!

Me: Yeah but he didn't mean too. Guys are just stupid.

Olivia: You're so right.

Both: (glare at Tom)

Tom: What? What'd I do?

And about Maddie and Olivia drinking... I don't think Olivia drinking is a good thing, but she usually ignores both me and Tom and does it anyway... and Tom usually ends up with a black eye. She doesn't know her limit that girl.

Olivia: I can put away drinks! I have never once passed out! Well... except for that one time at the AXP house... but I think they put something in my drink because when I woke up-

Tom: Olivia, I don't want to hear this.

Me: I don't think any of us want to hear this.

Olivia: Fine. But let's just say I became a LOT closer to one of my male friends that night...

Tom: (wide eyed stare) Olivia!

Oh there they go again. They do this a lot. Olivia had some wild nights before she met Tom it seems... yeah so Mowett certainly has no business nearly calling Maddie a slut when compaired to her (points at Olivia)

Olivia: What?

Anyway, those two need someone to smack them upside the head and make them be reasonable... but it seems Charlotte's doing a good job with that. Good luck to her!

Hypocritical much, William? I think it's time for a supernatural slap upside the head from a certain former shipmate and lover.

Thank you, as always :-)

Oh the tension builds! I love Maddie I really do. She completely shocked poor Mowett with her swearing. And Charlie... silly girl letting it slip you and Tom had some fun time in the maze... And Tom best hide if he knows what's good for him, because in a weird round about way it's all his fault.

Tom: Hey! Why is it my fault?

Olivia: Because you couldn't keep your pants on!

Tom: She started it! She couldn't keep her top on!

Me: Actually... you cut that off of her remember?

Tom: Oh yeah...

Olivia: Whatever. I think we should take Maddie out for a drink.

Tom: Huh?

Me: Just go back to sleep Tom...

Tom: Right... z

Olivia: As I was saying... I should take Maddie out for a drink.. she seems like she'd be a good drinking buddy you know? Then we can get drunk and get revenge!

Me: Ah yes... drunken revenge... where would soap operas be without it?

Anyway, I hope Maddie refuses Olivia's drinking suggestion and Will gets over himself and they all live happily ever after... or at least die in some dramatic way. Yay having three chapters to read to catch up on! Yay!

HI everyone!

I am so sorry no updates have gone up in a while. I'm afraid every time I am able to log on the bloody site has gone "read-only". (Being in Australia, I log on when you guys are all asleep!) Rest assured, as soon as the issues with the site are rectified, I will upload two great new chapters that are sitting here ready to go. Hang in there, fans - Mowett and Pullings and their lovely ladies will be with us again very soon!

Luv Miss Flossy!

You make me sad :( What happened to the frequent updates? :(

Yay! I can finally review! Silly being in read-only mode... anyway... aw... Will gets a house and Charlotte gets a house next door and now Will and Maddie and Tom and Charlie can have lots and lots of babies and they can all grow up together and run around causing much chaos to the countryside! Whoo! Unless bad things happen and everything goes wrong and and and... okay I won't go there... let's focus on the positive! By the way, the snow melted so you no longer have to worry about me pelted Tom with snowballs... however if it snows again I can't make any promises... mwahahahahahaha!

Wow.

That was the best chapter so far!

Yeah, I've been following this story since you published it since I LOVED Ocean of Secrets. Please Keep going!