Reviews for Watching You Go

Ludi
2004-10-14
ch 1,

abuseThis is probably an infantile way to start of a review, but I'm going to ask anyway:-

“Don’t hang up the fecking phone, you idjit!

angyxoxo
2004-10-11
ch 1,

abuseYou asked and i did!

Terrific insight on Juggernaut. I always forget that he's human and that he has all these emotional feelings and thoughts. It's hard to remember that, when most of the time, he's painted as a oversize lug that's always so angry. But the way you wrote him allowed me to relate to him.. a feat that i don't think i would have ever thought possible! I absolutely loved how you kept him so in character though, yet wrote him in such a way that though he was still angry about Sammy's death, he wasn't overbearing and crazy with his anger. You really kept him true to his "human-side".

I love the bits where it's just those little thoughts that keep him so real. Such as, "Then he went crazy and everything got shot to hell." or " I was going to have a really hard time not laughing when the switch got flipped." or "It took me a second to understand what he was really saying. Then he told me he wanted me to come to his execution. Sick bastard." Do you realize how effective these little bits are? Honestly, i think you are one of the strongest writers because you relate to your characters so well and can express it in such a way that i feel as though these characters are real and they are the ones who are saying this to me. It's brilliant how you could do that and i think that's why i enjoy your stories so much. It doesn't matter who the character is, you always manage to get me to relate to them on such a humanistic level and that makes me sympathisize with them so much more.

I like this story. I liked it a lot. Your characterization of Juggernaut was absoulutely phenomenal! You kept him real and that's why i bought the fact that he loved Tom. You didn't go overboard with that nor did you push the subject that deeply, but you kept it just enough at the right level where i did believe that they were lovers.

but really... Juggy banged She-Hulk... though, it seems like She-Hulk gets banged by everyone. Different subject though.

Loved the story, love your writing, look forward to more =)
angy

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