that was sad

Aw! Poor Kakashi! And Poor Naruto! TT_TT

ouch...i think you should have described what happened earlier though...

other than that, really nice story! :D

It went slightly too fast, and sort of went all over the place.

On the plus side, it was really really good! I had to bite my lip at the end to keep from tearing up.

Keep writing! :)

h-holy shit. wow...that was just...wow...i love it!

Aw that was so cute

who is the unknown man? it seemed like there was something else there. maybe you could expand on that a little? well, even if you don't this story is pretty darn awesome. he last line is epic

That was painful. Amazing job.

ah! kakshi no! poor naruto ! he killed some1 ! Por kakashi!

I luv Naruto-kun!

hi! Good story! So much better than mine! Though i must admit i didn't get a lot of it cause i don't read Naruto. I've never got around to it. T_T but anyways, i wanted to read some of the things you wrote :)

OMG! Great story!, I think you should have a chapter or two saying what happens mnext, i really want to know!

bitter...sweet? that was so-so-wonderfully written! i love the way Kakashi dies, the way Naruto went all revenge-like, Sasuke being calm and Sakura... I just want to tell you... i keep on screaming my head off everytime i read this! Kakashi died to save Naruto! YOU ROCK! and as usuall this story was tragic and beautiful

That was so cute!

Why does Kakashi always have to go and get himself killed? *sigh* oh well. Very well-written, a insy winsy formatting mistakes but no biggy. I adored it, it was brilliant!

WOW.

Man, you done me proud, so to speak! This is excellent! I LOVE IT!

Right up my alley.

I am going back to read this again! AND AGAIN! Heck, ON THE FAVES IT GOES! Write more soon. Remember, you still have my permission to use Hayashii!

Ta.