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| Seriously Yours 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseThat was beautifully written. :) |
| Frosty Pig 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseThis story was kinda poetic. Nicely done. |
| PinkyLemon 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuse“Ramen,” Sasuke stated, “Is the most god-awful ** on the face of the earth and I’m not eating any.” Naruto’s outrage knew no bounds. That made me laugh out loud... Rather dark, overall, but that's not a bad thing. I like the little "sections" and how they give glimpses into the characters' feelings. Itachi's one crazy bastard, that's for sure... Good job. |
| me 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is one of the best one-chapter stories ever written. >__< one i shall be sure to read over and over until the words almost morph out of my forehead after going past whatever membrane surrounds my brain *__* |
| me 2004-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abusehmm, this was the first "minimalism" style i've been introduced to..and it'd be safe to say that.. i like it. ^_^ you know how movie trailers seem WAY better than the movies themselves sometimes? it was the same idea with this, the scene shifts were really cool, i wish you wrote more stories like this though, they work well |
| ChibiHarika 2004-10-12 ch 1, | abuseOh my god TT-TT a must fav.! Love it! Love it! *Kisses ficlet* Harika -- When you say "I love you" to me everyday, do I say "I love you too"? or do I smile sadly and say "I know"? |
| goodgood 2004-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a good read, though I think it was a bit um...presumptious in describing Itachi. Sure we know he has Sasuke's full admiration/envy/love/hate but I'm not sure how realistic it is to portray him as 'kindly' as you did, but then again I HATE the bastard. I liked Sasuke's thoughts. The ideals of an abandoned child, one who reaches out for his family but always feel inadequate are spot on. I guess that if it weren't for the NarutoSasuke pairing I would be happier. I dont know why people feel the need to pair the two up romantically to establish Sasuke's tumultous state of mind. I think portraying them as potential friends or even kindred souls without the sex would be just as effective. |
| Ravyn-09 2004-10-11 ch 1, | abuseThe last part. Is that sasuke and naruto? Im not sure. Did sasuke kill naruto? Damn im confused it's definatly a good fic but damn im really confused. Please explain the last section for me if thats ok, or clarify. Thanks sorry for the trouble. Luv Ravyn |