That was beautifully written. :)

This story was kinda poetic. Nicely done.

“Ramen,” Sasuke stated, “Is the most god-awful ** on the face of the earth and I’m not eating any.”
Naruto’s outrage knew no bounds.

That made me laugh out loud...

Rather dark, overall, but that's not a bad thing. I like the little "sections" and how they give glimpses into the characters' feelings. Itachi's one crazy bastard, that's for sure...

Good job.

this is one of the best one-chapter stories ever written. >__< one i shall be sure to read over and over until the words almost morph out of my forehead after going past whatever membrane surrounds my brain *__*

hmm, this was the first "minimalism" style i've been introduced to..and it'd be safe to say that.. i like it. ^_^ you know how movie trailers seem WAY better than the movies themselves sometimes? it was the same idea with this, the scene shifts were really cool, i wish you wrote more stories like this though, they work well

Oh my god TT-TT a must fav.! Love it! Love it!
*Kisses ficlet*

Harika
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When you say "I love you" to me everyday, do I say "I love you too"? or do I smile sadly and say "I know"?

That was a good read, though I think it was a bit um...presumptious in describing Itachi. Sure we know he has Sasuke's full admiration/envy/love/hate but I'm not sure how realistic it is to portray him as 'kindly' as you did, but then again I HATE the bastard.
I liked Sasuke's thoughts. The ideals of an abandoned child, one who reaches out for his family but always feel inadequate are spot on.
I guess that if it weren't for the NarutoSasuke pairing I would be happier. I dont know why people feel the need to pair the two up romantically to establish Sasuke's tumultous state of mind. I think portraying them as potential friends or even kindred souls without the sex would be just as effective.

The last part. Is that sasuke and naruto? Im not sure. Did sasuke kill naruto? Damn im confused it's definatly a good fic but damn im really confused. Please explain the last section for me if thats ok, or clarify. Thanks sorry for the trouble.
Luv
Ravyn