Wow! Awesome! You MUST continue it!

this is good. you gonna continue?

Please continue the story you don't need to give up on it

Man! So much mystery! It's great! Continue!

Cool story! You can't leave it there! who does the voice belong to huh?
But now some friendly advice... Try to make sure you re-read what you've writen, that way you can spot any obvious mistakes... or even better get someone else to read it for you! I find reading my work out loud helps... you mite feel daft the the first few times but it really helps you to judge how your work flows, if you cant speak it easily chances are your readers won't be able to read it comfortably...
Here you talk about Sonic having a headache then repeat yourself by saying his head was throbing... hence re-read out loud! It'll give you a good laugh if nothing else!
I state now my grammar and spelling is far from perfect!
Cool story! (this must be the longest review I've ever written!) Keep Writing!!
Green Hat

This is a very good story i like it! hope you update soon!

(I see that you like Shadow...you should read my story)

This is a very good story i like it! hope you update soon!

(I see that you like Shadow...you should read my story)

Good chapter. Update soon...please...please...please?
Up yet...up yet...up yet?!
Yang:shakes his head: Update soon. She's getting drunk off of holiday spirit.
Cel:seen drinking from a bottle labeled "holiday spirit": HAVE A HOLY JOLY CHRISTMAS THIS YEAR! (drunkly sung) :falls to the ground drunkly:
Yang: This is Yang the Hedgehog saying, "With the author out of the way the world shall be mine"! Muahahahahahahahaha!
Yin: With out the author you can't do anything. Not even breath...
Kenya: This is Kenya the Hedgedude signing off for Cel! ^_^

Scary. Update soon.

Can't belive your stuff get flamed...people can be so mean! Haven't talked to ya in a while. Happy Turkey Day! Oh! I got MSN messenger now! Yippy! I talked to Sally...I'm shocked to find how much younger I am than you guys...I'm 13...you're not...
This is Celestial the Hedgird signing off! ^_~

Cool story. I especially like the begining as Shadow wonders about who he really is...

A few minor spelling and grammar errors (I of all people am the last to have a right to correct spelling, but...)
"halfed" is not a word, I believe you mean "Red and white halved on his shoes"
There is no "e" in timing where you are talking about a new moon...

An execlent story! Keep writing! You'll have to finish this I want to know what happens to Shadow and Co! (Seeing Rouge humiliated is always a good thing, only beaten by seeing it happen to Sonic)

P.S thanx for your reviews, they never fail to make me smile!

HAHAHAHAHAHAH! your author comments are really funny, ever think about wrighting humor? this story just keeps getting more mysterious by the minute, update soon i can't wait to see what happens.

WHIS? whats that? and i can understand your virus proplem, my PC has a few of them its self. this chapter was a good one, kind of short but good none the less. unfourtuntly there where some grammer errors, but you should be able to fix those esaliy if you just proof read, and yes i know its not my favorite thing to do either.

I have yet to read the other chapters up i plan to soon, but just from these chapters i really like where your going with this and i can't wait to read more.

Oh good so far! Also, the last chapter gave me inspiration for a new story! YES! *huggles you tightly* Thank you so much!

Yang: Um, maybe you should let him go. I don't think he can breath.

Cel: *lets go* ^_^; Sorry. I gotta call Cinder today!

Cinder: But I'm right here.

Cel: *rolls eyes* The REAL Cinder.

Mystery Boy: I, Mystery Boy, duth sign off for Celestial the Hedgird, the almighty creator of ME and all my glory! ^_^