thats sick dude

This is an excellent character study of Colonel Falcon and I'm making note of it for my fiction G.I. Joe Ressurection which stars Falcon. You did a great job here and really brought home that Falcon wants to be like his brother and even surpass him in most ways but just couldn't ever feel like he had suceeded in doing so. The lines about his rather mynogynistic attitudes toward women, his conversation with his mother, and the part about working for a living were all very good. Great job.

Way cool!

Not many people have attempted to examine the relationship (often strained) between these two brothers. It gave great deal of insight, and was fun to read!

You pulled it off perfectly. How about another story.

OH WOW! Talk about bringing back memories...I used to love this show and the comic books so much...and this was a well-written story. Two thumbs up! :)