Wow. That was brilliant iambic pentameter. How did you do that? :O On a second note, hilarious!

This is a fanfiction that should have gotten 40 reviews but in the end, was hidden from the world like Hatshepsut.

Except cooler.

Which is a shitload of cool, right there.

The end was such a tragedy it was hillarious.

The absolute *totally* of hilarious.

And it made me laugh. Muchly.

Which is another feat conquered right there.

Look--

:O

^_~ Luffs and kisses! Osaka-neechan

too hilarious lol XD!!~
you've been reading shakespeare, havent you! quite a zany romeo and Juliet ending! you made fun of Oishi (ha ha, i lurved the poetic use of language)and killed off three seigaku regulars at once, and made it funny!
kudos to u.

You win. There's all I have to say. This was awesome on so many levels - I particularly loved Oishi angsty poetic speech versus Eiji's dialogue. And Tezuka was, of course, priceless. Have a sparkly new intraweb as your prize. And, of course, cookies.

O.O;;




P.s. What was in the box?

I loved it so much I logged in! XD I do love it, I hope you get a kajillion reviews, though... that doesn't seem to be happening.

-_-;;

wow. that.. was.. amazing. how?? how do you write so well?? *bangs head repeatedly on desk*

i bow to you. *bows*

*dies laughing* This was awesome! Very creatively done. I applaud thee!

It was kinda like bugs bunny does shakespear...and I may have spelt that wrong...but I just loved the blend of shear dramatic flare and innocent, childish playfullness! This was very well written and very enjoyable.

wahaha.. so horribly hilarious!
i LOVE it!

hehe..
wish you could see the tiny fit of giggles and the large idiotic smile on my face right now..

you're so good at this, it sounded so much like a play, yet still sounded like them!

*dies of laughter*

oh wait, please write more!

hahaha, this fic is so good!! so hilarious in the way u portrayed eiji's death! and wut's better than a fanfic with morals? muhahaha, write more plz.

Wow.

I am in awe of your amazing writing talent.
Has someone been reading Shakespeare lately? XD

Anyway, I love it. I really hope to see more from you in the future, I'm adding this to favorites and you to author alert.

I reiterate, great work. Much love.

i am... amused...

this is... well, i am at loss for words on how to describe how i feel, but... this is... wonderful!

*squeals*

this is just what i need to brighten up my morning, thanks so much for sharing it! ^-^

... ... *speechless* Wa, amazing fic~ Though I don't understand why Oishi must speak so much and Eiji must keep to one-liner, I am still amazed. The language is wonderful and I kinda think the plot is cute. Inui is exceptionally hilarious~ Why don't you try for other pairings as well. Momoryo, momoryo, momoryo...