I absolutely love this story! Cant wait for an update! Thanks for writing stories with vince as the main character. I love vince! I love when vince gets a real woman too! Thanks again you are an awesome writer and you keep improving with every story!

awesome! are you gonna update?

I LOVE THIS STORY .. this was my first vince/ oc story and i love it im glad i picked yours first i was a little iffy on wether i should read a vince/oc fic but it turned out well now i want to know why she needs to stay in his office so update soon

Um... so I'm comparing the two versions of this, and it's hard considering this one isn't finished.

Suckish.

more more more more more more more more more more more

This story is amazing. I didnt really like the movie that much but after reading this im watching it now. lol. I never noticed how hot vince actually was. I really hope you continue to write this story, im anxious to know whats gonna happen.

OH MAN, c'mon. don't end the chapter like that. pleaase, upadte SOON!:D
I'm loving this story! :)

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! Up until now, I've only read Dom centred stories and only read the first chapter thinking it was about Dom but once I realised it wasn't I wasn't going to read it but for some strange reason I just couldn't help myself and then I just was hooked by like the 4th chapter lol! I mean I even got up early this morning after a night out(had to pry myself away from the computer to get ready) and with a hangover because I couldn't sleep until I found out what happened... I cannot wait to read this next story, I think I just may be addicted to your writing...

Hugs Mel x x x

You have to continue
It's so good right now.
Just please don't let anybody from the Toretto team die



~Nellie~

love the story please update soon

Please please please tell me you are continuing with this story!

i really love this series,
im a new reader, but i noticed you werent posting lately.
no accusations, just an observation
but id really love to know how this ends!

Like where this story is going, hopefully you'll write more! :)

More!
I love this story! You have to finish it!

I've read all of the chapters and I gotta say, this story s GREAT!