This was so perfect and cute! I loved it when Sirius kissed Remus' werewolf bite. That's totally something reckless and random Sirius would do. :) Sirius was just really awesome in this fic, pining after Remus and seducing him as he did towards the end. :D Excellent, really.

Just a tip -- lay off the English slang. We don't really talk like that; less is more!
Nice humour at times.
Work on use of punctuation, particularly exclamation marks within narratives.
Well done!

Ooh-I love this! They are so in character, it's really unusual to find such a realistic yet satisfying SBRL fic. And all the British slang was hilarious! If you actually aren't British then I would die of shock and commend you for your abilities.

I loved the dialogue and adjectives you used in this story. Very British. A lot of authors forget that the story is set in Great Britain and (for the Marauders) takes place in the 1970s. Not to mention it added to the story and made it seem much more hilarious.

lol. i like this.

That was cute and sexy. My inner wolfstar fangirl is purring right now! ::adds to c2::

This is just a total delight in everyway!

write more rl/sb please! fanks:P

LOVED IT!! how you wrote the characters was EXACTLY as i imagined them. sirius was jsut soo SIRIUS!! i loved it so much. all the remus not thinking he liked sirius and such. adorable. i can't tell if your british or your just really good at wrting it, but it sounded really fab! great job!

This was so sweet. I loved the way that for once it was Sirius who had secretly wanted Remus for ages instead of the other way around.

it's so...english! God, i love it. Nobody uses slang anymore; and really...it was the seventies. they'd have been talking exactly how you've portrayed them here, and it's fantastic! saw some words i haven't heard in ages.

Glad someone remembered Hogwarts is in england.

Otherwise; aagh. i love the tone, and how brash and loud Sirius is - people always make him too soft and pandering, and it's not him at all. brill.

It's so funny to read all the slang! There's so much of it! (I'm so freaking American, lol.)

I ♥ this story so much.
*adds to favorites*

I love this story. It's just plain awesome. No more can be said. It's awesome-ness is spiraling out of control and is going to soon implode into a black hole of awesome.

i love it. absolutely adore it. and it's quite interesting to read; usually most hp fanfics i've read don't have the english slang in it (im australia, btw) they're very blunt to each other and it's absolutely adorable.