Any chance of there being more chapters on this story anytime soon? You've got an interesting beginning, and it was a nice bit about having to take Jack's appendix out *again*. {snicker} I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Great story, great interactions, please continue with this.

very cute story. I recently rewatched fragile balance and wanted to see if anyone had written stories about mini jack and found yours. I like how Jack became a Jake. it was a good idea! :D

I say as the others: When is the next chapter comming?

C'mon write more! Great story!

Good start for a story but were are the other chapters. Please update if possible.

Whe will you write some more? I realy like this story

hey, is there going to be more to this story?

I give you praise because you didn't turn Jack Junior into Angst!Jack. I want you to write more. :)

I Dont Know Where To Begin.

For A Start, I Like The Concept, I Have Oftne Wondered What Happened To The O'Neill Clone. He Was Pretty Cute.

However, I Cant See Where The Story Is Going. is This AU? By 'Fragile Balance' Maybourne Was No Longer With The NID And I Think He Was On Another Planet For That Matter, And There Has Nether Benn Mention Of A Son.

As For The Wrighting I Have Seen A Few Spelling Mistakes And I Think You Should Slow Down And Go Into More Details In Certain Areas.

But Please Keep It Up I What To Know Where The Story Goes.

P.S Its O'Neill With Two L's. There Is A Col. O'Neil With One L But He's Less Funny.

More in character during the first part, rushed a little in the second, but the story is still coming across.

Great cjapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Ouch. That's gotta hurt. And the timing sure does suck for Jack, erm, both of 'em. Can't wait to see where this goes!

lol, funny

Has the shapings to be a really good story.
Keep it up, please