M, good story ^.^. Nice ending, too. Sequel :D...?

cool story :-)

Your forest reminded my of Neil Gaiman's 'Mirrormask.' Ever read it or see the film based on it? I just really love his work.

Anyway, (^^) I really enjoyed this fic and thought it was really tasteful. I think you made a good choice when you decided to keep this storyline just barely skirting beyond the friend line and no further. I don't think it was overly dramatic, and Sato never became the *uber* angst-muffin that he often descends into. The only thing I might say in criticism is that, for taking the time to explain so much about the Read Array and the various people's charts, the consequence of all of that information wasn't really emphasized adequately. Of course this is just my opinion. :)

Hi! I just found this story and I really like it so far, but your author's notes confused me. You said: "I have the first volume in English, and then got so mad at the changes (WTF, TP, would it have KILLED you to have Daisuke and Satoshi call each other by their last names? ARGH. And there's a REASON for Daisuke calling both the twins Harada-san. Promise)"

But the version I have has Greg Ayers as Satoshi and Kevin Corn as Daisuke. I'm wondering if this is the version you are talking about because Daisuke and Satoshi do call each other by their last names and the Harada twins are refeered to as Harada-san. Is this the version you were talking about? If not, I highly recommend this version, it's not cut or censored!

I'm off to read the rest of your wonderful story now, Bye!

Roxy

Love the last eleven words.

that ended fairly well

*ringing silence*
Oh. Higher. Beings.
You're agodagodagodagod.
So. Death. Pretty.
*lets out breath and says goodnight*

it's a good story, and i love that there are no harada twins! I HATE THEM!beyond all reson i hate evrything about them! I just wish dark ( cause he's like my fave character) would kill them in the most brutal and savage way!! (and just so u know, i'm using my mom's e-mail address-.-)

Wah...a truly beautiful story ^^ I really have work that needs to be done, but I couldn't resist leaving a review when you did such a wonderful job Hehehe...I'm still new to the DNA fandom, so I'm not sure how much is based on what happens in the anime/manga, but it was an exciting read nonetheless. You've done a really good job at building the relationships between the characters.

I love the Dark-Daisuke dynamic and the reflective natures of the characters: both the same but opposite. Not two halves of a whole, but each a whole refracted differently in the events the face. Hehehe...after reading your fic I can't help but want to wax philosophical every other sentence >

This story is amazing, I love how everything just seems to fit together so perfectly.

But i'll stop myself before I start babbling >.< there's no way I could explain how wonderful this story was, one I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it.

I can't wait to read the sequel ^o^ Good Work!

This was just so... wooah! *is totally amazed* You can write so well! Every feeling you created felt so... real! :D Thnak for wirting this and making the end not too unbearable sad ;-)

I've gotta be one of the worst reviewers ever. I've read this quite a while ago and even recced it over at livejournal, and yet, no review. Argh.

I don't know what I can say that your other reviewers haven't. I normally am very, very averse to slash, yaoi, etc, but SatoshiDaisuke was one of the pairings that I could actually see as canon or as a possibility. And, unfortunately, I can't stand the twins at all. But I think this fic really helped with the whole me liking said pairing thing. And man, I don't know where to begin. The voice in it, and the tone, and just your writing style. If I could write like that, I'd be so very happy. And the humor that you can write. Words cannot express.

This is one of my most favorite fics ever, which I still find funny since I'm such a het fangirl. But if half of the het writers could write as well as this, yeah, well, you know. Great job, love it so much, and just a heads-up to let you know that I've recced this and several other fics of yours. And sorry again that I'm such a horrible reviewer XD;

Gorgeous! I am off to find the sequel AS I TYPE, but thought I should let you know I adored it before devouring that piece as well. You have a beautiful sense of pacing and timing, and understand that you can't rush those boys. Can't wait to see where you take them.

aw poor satoshi, i dont wnat him to die, and also tis kinda funny to have dark and satoshi fighting over dai, well anyway i love it.
luv Faina

I like it. I like the conversations too.