This was a really interesting idea! I never thought about the story behind Zeros dad leaving and how Mrs. Yelnats felt when Stanely was gone. This was really, really well done. Keep it up!

aw! That was so sweet!

*Hb*

*applauds* Oh, well done. Very well done indeed. I'm glad you veered off the well-beaten path of girls at CGL or other overused plotlines . . . and let me say, you did it admirably. Power to the unappreciated characters ;)
Anyways, I enjoyed the short but sweet simplicity of it, especially one of those Louis Sachar Holes-style coincidences. Very cool. And the park about Derrick Dunne amused me.. he's a dumbass, lol.

Cool...
Awesome idea.

That was so lame it's not funny anti TOUCHDOWN!

Original, very original.
You defintiely have a knack for this kind of writing, loved the plot.

Keep it up!

~Christina