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'DalisaY-17' 2008-06-22 . chapter 25
Yeow. . . Awe-shome epilogue. . . I sense a sequel, though. . . Hope to hear more from you. . .

Great job with the whole of Raven's Legacy! More power! XDXDXD
Katya K. 2008-06-19 . chapter 25
One word to desctibe your story: AMAZING! I never got bored of reading it!
Cerulean Crystal 2008-06-17 . chapter 25
raven sound so funny. i like him. still. anyway i look forward to your new stories. this story gave me nice memories and it was interesting to read. thank you.
ShadowRebirth37 2008-06-16 . chapter 25
Wow Knight!! Fantastic job!!XD Lol. The begining with Raven and Sarah was so cute!! I'm still laughing. Lol. A great ending to my favorite ever (and first fave) fic!! I'm going to cry, Knight!

I hate to see this fic end, but it was destined to happen sooner or later. I love this fic, it made me laugh, cry, scream, and wonder. You should get this published as the official follow-up of CC/GF. I bet you could make a movie out of this. Lol. If you make this into a movie, I'd go to see it in a heartbeat, even though Zachaule scares me witless. Lol.

I can't believe its over. I'm crying!XD Wow... four years in the making. That's amamzing!! My poor fic, "The Dark Savior", is only a month old. Lol. Thank you so much for not abandoning this fic. I'm so happy you decided to continue it. Now you'll have to start a follow-up fic about Vega and Sarah. Lol. Just messing with ya.

Btw, I started a few new fics. "Broken" is about what might have happened if Shadow had fought back agianst Raven when Raven tried to tame him. You'll have to read to find out what happens. Lol. "Of Zoids and Organoids" is a collection of short one-shots. You'll have to read it for yourself. "Fury's Core" is a NC0 fic about the Berserk Fury, Vega, and a few other familiar faces from CC/GF. Lol. I cant explain it. Could you please R & R them and my other fics? Like "The Dark Savior" and "Rebirthing"?

Btw, Leiden has made his apperance in "The Dark Savior". If you ever get some time could you please R & R it along with my other fics. I would really appriciate it.

I digress, fantastic end to a fabulous fic. I hate to see it end, but you know, all good things must come to an end. Agian, fantastic job!! I can't find words strong enough to describe. Lol. I hope to see more Zoids fics from you in the future, Knight!! Sorry this is so llong, I rant when Im excited. Lol. Agian, fabulous job!!
~Ibeyla ^^

P.S- if you ever get a chance, but I know your busy, but please R & R my fics. I would really appriciate it. :)
Diddz 2008-06-15 . chapter 23
i've always been checking if you've updated!! :D this is such an awesome fic to just abandon :D ..please plz continue writing :D
Black Tiger 2008-05-31 . chapter 15
wow...this is pretty friggin sweet...Nice Ideas.
Black Tiger 2008-05-31 . chapter 11
This fic is awesome...-sniffs- Por Vega and Bit
ShadowRebirth37 2008-05-30 . chapter 24
Absolutly fantastic! Man, you REALLY had me worried in the begining! I thought poor Raven was dead! Amazing fight and everything, I can't say enough! More than worth the long wait! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update it soon!

Oh yeah, I used to be the anonymous reviewer "Ibeyla the Zoidian", but now I have this account! I musta left like 40 reviews for this fic, I just loved it dearly! Btw, where's Bit? You think he would be playing with Vega. Anyway, agian I can't say enough about this fic! Your detail, your description, masterful and perfect, worlds better than I could ever even hope to do in my fics!

This was one of the first fics I ever red, so I love it even more! This fic is so unique, so creative, so action-filled, cute, funny and tearful at the same time. Many of the books I've red can't compare to this! Zachaule is the perfect villan, cruel, calm, calculating, bloodthirsty, relentless, no matter how many times I read this fic he still gives me the chills!! I must add you to my favorite authors list!!XD Again, masterful and perfect chapter, finally the world is rid of that horrible demon!!XD

For being speechless about this chapter, I sure have said a lot!XD Again, absolutly amazing job, on this chapter and the fic as a whole! I was so thrilled to see an update!! Yuo made my day, and I really needed it!! I have finals this week in high school, so I really needed a good warm and fuzzy-ending to a fabulous fic! Well, techniclly its not over, but that will be bitter-sweet.

Agian, masterful job, this must be the best Raven/Reese (or Ryss, however you spelled it.XP) fic I have ever red, and I have red a LOT. I can't wait to read the next chappie! Man I'm crying this was so emotional! I wish I had that much talent!! Please update it soon, I want to know what happens next. Sorry this review is so long.XP Please continue and post the next chapter soon!! Until next time.

~Ibeyla ^O^

P.S- could you mybe take a look at my humble Zoids fics? They're called "Rebirthing"- a canon fic from Shadow's POV when he is reborn after dying protecting Raven, "The Distant Stars"- a teaser of sorts for an upcoming fic that was originally an English assignment, and my pride and joy, "The Dark Savior"- a fic about Shadow and Raven and Ambient that takes place before Chatoic Century. Now that I think about it, "The Dark Savior" has similar Organoid-human and Organoid-Organoid fight scenes as here, but mine aren't as detailed or bloody, not that bloody's a bad thing!!XD Could you please read and review my humble fics? The opinon of a master such as yourself would mean a LOT to a beginner such as me!XD

I digress, I absolutly love this fic and can't wait to see more! Thank you SO much for updating!! This fic was one of the first ones I ever red, and it made me want to get my own account and try my humble hand at fics!! I will patiently wait for the next chapter!! Please take a look at my fics, and update soon!!

A millon more praises,

~Ibeyla
Cerulean Crystal 2008-05-29 . chapter 24
update soon.
ShadowRebirth37 2008-05-10 . chapter 23
Eep! Why did you stop?! This is fantastic! Please keep going! I've never seen such an in-depth Raven/Ryss before! Zachaule is SO clucking scary! And mean! He scares me! But why did you stop? You can't just leave me hanging like this! PLEASE CONTINUE! For the sake of Zoid Eve, please keep going! If you like the Organoids, I have 2 fics you might like, 'Rebirthing'- about Shadow's rebirthing told from his POV, and 'Shadow in the Smoke'- an AU, before Chaotic Century, about how Raven and Shadow met. I would really like it if a master Raven fic writer red and reviewed my stories! But PLEASE UPDATE AND CONTINUE THIS FIC! I beg of you! I'll keep an eye open for updates! Until next time.
~Ibeyla
(Oh, yeah, I used to be anon. reviewer 'Ibeyla the Zoidian'!XP)
unknown 2008-04-17 . chapter 23
I started to read this story a long time ago,and today i finally finished reading every chapter here. I like this story a lot. You have to continue and finish this story. You just can't leave us hanging here for about a year, especially with a cliffhanger like that. Please if you read this, continue this story and finish it. I want to know how it will end. Please update!
Ibeyla the Zoidian 2008-02-15 . chapter 23
... Im speechless... ur fic is amazing, plz continue. That part with Raven and Sarah was cute, it really fills the gap tween CC & NC0. Zachuel (sp?) really scares me, Im gettin nightmares! If only he appeared when Raven was in the Breaker, he could smash that demon like a bug! Im worried, hes gettin more and more aggresive, I dont want to think about what he'll do to poor Raven next! Dont let it kill Raven or Shadow or anyone, I hate stories where he or Shadow dies! Plz update. Holy Helkat, PLZ UPDATE!! XD
Ibeyla the Zoidian 2008-02-01 . chapter 23
OH MY GOD! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! Why did you stop there, keep writing I beg of you DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY!! You have to continue! I assure you, people are still reading! You can leave me hanging like this, I don't think my heart can take the suspense! What will that beast of an Organoid do to them next?! My Organoid is poised and ready to rip out that smirking demon's throat!! Please post some new chapters; the story's great, I love it!! You still have at least one loyal reader cheering you on!! POST!
Arathia 2007-12-25 . chapter 17
With your aging logic. It's good logic. But it depends on where your info is coming from.
In the anime Van is 17, but in the manga it mentions that Raven was born into his family 15 years ago, so he's fourteen.
On the back of the DVD set that my friend lent to me (yay!) it said Van was in training for 2 years, but I hear everywhere that it's 4, so they make him 18 o.0...
Anyway, if you combine that infromation, then myabe you could make the assumption that Dan didn't know his actually age, considering he had Post Traumatic Stress, and didn't even tell him his name, so maybe Raven was 9 when he went to Dan, but looked around Van's age (12). Anyway...that's just my thoery/info... (oh, I know tht Van was 12 when Raven taken with Prozen because the old ** says that Raven was there for five years...or at least, five years of hard/good work.)

Still, 27s good.
And I LOVE this story, it's awesome that you got them both in character too ^^.
'DalisaY-17' 2007-10-05 . chapter 23
Cool. . . I think this is one of the best RavenRyss fics I've ever read. . . Seriously. . . Oh, and hope ya update! I really wanna know what'll happen to the gang, especially the kids. Thanks for posting this again!

Ganbatte to ganbatte!
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