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| Wolfram-and-Hart-Sauron 2005-10-12 ch 7, | abuseAre you gonna continue this story? Cause you really, really, really need to! |
| Cuiasodo 2004-12-26 ch 7, | abuseIt's a good chapter. You had only one typo and not gramatical errors that I saw, so you get a 9 out of 10 for grammar in my book. The chapter is a bit short though and leaves me longing for more. In other words, please update soon. |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-29 ch 7, | abuseDUN DUN DUN. Cliffhanger me likey. Update!! Can't stop waiting!! Rock on!! Please review my fic pleaze!! ROck on!! |
| charlie90 2004-10-26 ch 6, | abuseAloha! Just read dinner party part 1+2 v.cool ps. death to shower curtains from the figment of your imagination.or. charlie, ya know whatever. |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-10-25 ch 6, | abuseI LOVE IT! Now the whole gang knows that Spike is alive!! Yah! Update it's awesome!! |
| Cuiasodo 2004-10-23 ch 6, | abuseOnce again, good story. You might want to proofread your story before posting it because I noticed a great deal of typos this time arround. Keep going. |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-10-23 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Spike and Buffy are together again! I just love this fic! |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abuseSpike and Angel hugged yeah! I really like!! They are now mortals!! YEAH! |
| Cuiasodo 2004-10-22 ch 3, | abuseOK in my last review, I meant to say that I dissagree, not diddagree. And I think I might remmember who Lindsay or whatever his name was. He was the crepy evil church minister guy from Buffy, right? If that was him, he had it comming. I mean, come on! He freakin' scewered Xander's left eye out. Xander is my favorite character on that show. I'm glad that that evil dude is dead! If you ask me, that church minister guy's death was too good for him! Of course I may just me confusing Lindsay with someone else. Oh well. |
| Cuiasodo 2004-10-21 ch 4, | abuseStill good. I'm going to have to go with Kinoa's opinion on this one. You do need more depth. And there are a few grammar mistakes. But still a great stoy! However, I completly diddagree with Imzadi. Angle DOES deserve his reward. After all of the pain he went through, he deserves it more than anything. Going back to some Buffy history, when someone is changed into a vampire, their soul is forced out and goes on to the afterlife. The empty shell of a body is then controled by a blood-thirsty deamon who is esentialy the true esscence of a vampire. When the gypsies restored Angles soul, it was as if he had come out of a deep sleep. He was not in controll of his actions when Angelus had commited the many brutal murders. He had to live through the pain and suffering of knowing that his body had done horrible things while he was expelled form it. To top that off, the gypsies, oblivious to the fact that the TRUE Angle was not in controll when he murdered countless others, expected him to suffer for something that he had essentially never done. And the whole "one moment of happyness and everything goes down the drain" was such a load of crap! If the gypsies had realy know what was going on, they would not have done the curse. Also, I have completly forgotten who the crap Lindsay was, so maybe he was not all that important? Excuse me for being off subject but I love to argue with someone (in this case Imzadi) when the facts are in my favor. Keep going with the story. |
| charlie90 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked it its on my favourites list well worth goimg bog eyed over. ps. Irish people rule! |
| Imzadi 2004-10-18 ch 4, | abuseNice light Buffy/Spike banter. I liked it. |
| Imzadi 2004-10-18 ch 3, | abuseA guy that nobody cared about? You'd be surprised how many people loved him & were aghast at what happened to him. He did not deserve this. And he at the very least deserved a decent burial, not being left to rot among the creatures he had been sent to kill. Angel is the one who doesn't deserve happiness although, as I said, I'm happy for Spike. |
| Cuiasodo 2004-10-17 ch 2, | abuseStill good. Not many coments, I just want to let you know I'm still reading it. But I do have one question. Wasn't Buffy dating some guy called The Immortal last time? |
| Imzadi 2004-10-17 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad to see Buffy & Spike together. You've captured his nervousness at the thought of seeing her very well. I still don't think Angel deserves to be happy after murdering Lindsey, though, and, yes, by giving Angel his Shanshu, you are condoning it. Murder deserves to be punished, not rewarded, especially if you believe, as I do, that Lindsey was going to be on the side of good and Angel had no proof that he wouldn't be. |