Reviews for Unlovable Schemer

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animesoulxD 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseGorgeous, gorgeous story. My mind kind of broke into a million little pieces somewhere along the way when I was reading this and with good reason. The characterization is spot on and I simply adore the way you've written Kaiba in here. He's just so...I don't know, posessive and sensual and wild at times, that it makes my inner fangirl go alsjfdlasjfdlsajf. And I'm really liking the Yugi angst too. Poor boy, he's torn between playing the faithful husband (though I should take back the "faithful" part, considering he's already rolled around in the hay with a certain CEO xD) and succumbing to his desires and eloping off with Kaiba! I realize that this fic is most likely abandoned and will never be updated but nevertheless...it doesn't hurt to hope, right? ^^;; Though, in case it really -is- dead (ack, animesoulxD, it IS DEAD! stop trying to convince yourself otherwise! smacks self)...do Kaiba and Yugi and Yami end up together? Do the three of them get a happy ending? DX
Shadow over Egypt 2007-05-09 ch 4,	abuse...And this is an absolutely gorgeous story. (in love) Even though it's 'dead'. (pouts) It's possibly the best of this er...would it be classed a threesome? I've read that I can remember. Kudos! (Though I wish to God you'd write more.)
redconvoy 2007-03-30 ch 4,	abuseHEY! How about continuing this story! I want to know what happens next! I was enjoying this!
SabakuNoTenshi 2006-04-21 ch 2,	abuseAh, there aren't enough good rivalshipping stories out there, but yours is one of the best. The sort of thing I'll find myself reading over and over. Here's hoping you'll update soon. ~Angey
jianojean 2005-08-11 ch 2,	abuseLOL @ your reverence to tops & bottoms of veggies. Well I for one, cannot attest to that, because I tried asparagus when I was a child and got violently sick off of them, so...shrugs But I'm pretty good about eatingg ALL of my veggies smirks For your first story solo, I really think you've done a pretty good job...despite shitty formatting :p LOL XD Keep up the good work!
PJ Zatken 2005-08-11 ch 4,	abuseLOL... What do you mean you're NOT good at this thing? What do you mean that this chapter NEARLY killed you? This was GOOD... very very GOOD. Ah, girl...don't keep us readers waiting too long...I beg you... Please update soon because you have a story with an amazing plot and lots yaoi-ish goodness oozing here ;-D
PJ Zatken 2005-08-11 ch 3,	abuseOMG...such an evil, evil, evil yaoi-ish cliffie! Do you know that I now crown you the Queen of Sexual Repression... I want my yaoi...and I'm loving how you tease your readers. Do you know I have a stupid, yaoi-fangirl, giddy grin on my face right now? LOL... Anyway, I love it... Keep it up..
PJ Zatken 2005-08-11 ch 2,	abuseMan...total sexual repression here...you're just killing me right now LOL. I love love love this story ;-D
PJ Zatken 2005-08-11 ch 1,	abuseOMG... You got me so so hooked with this story. I've read a lot of yaoi-shounen-ai stories and this one happens to be one of the best due to the complex plot, the keeping of characterization (of course, save for the yaoi / shounen ai aspect LOL), and the words...
Clarity2199 2005-07-14 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this story...but it's been so long since you updated. You're not going to stop, are you? Clarity
PageTurn 2005-06-14 ch 4,	abuseIncredible. How do you do it? This amazing-ness... Please more.
voyuerer 2005-04-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseHi, I hope you continue sometime so. This one is just to good to not continue
whitesakura 2005-04-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseHi Solitaire. You once reviewed my "Ra Beneath the Night Sky" on and told me about how interest in YugiOh is waning. I just wanted to say, I love your fic and yours and Xypne's stories are what drew me into writing for the fandom in the first place. Please say you're still thinking of this story. I'm sure many readers (and me!) are still hoping you'll continue.
voyuerer 2005-02-06 ch 4, anon.	abuseOMG! This is so fab! Please keep going.
Le Vendeur 2005-01-31 ch 4,	abuse“I’m counting on it.”Muahahahahahahaha!! ::rolls around on the floor laughing insanely:: I LOVE IT! Wonderfully evil. So deliciously scrumptious! The whole idea for the story is great! So origional. I love homerecking Kaiba. He is just so effin hot! All forcefull and demanding like that ::shivers:: I love your torn, conflicted Yugi. Faithfull husband, or passionate lover. It really gets him in charactor, if he had just fallen for Seto's charms (while it would have been VERY understandable,) I guess it's not very Yugi-like to go and cheat on his wife... Well, Keep up the awesome job! We're all loving it!

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