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| Mew Mew White Dragon 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseThe story was very cute! For English not being your first language it was very good. Much better than most I've read where English isn't their first language. You really did a good job the story was really good and cute! |
| CTHKSI 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuse...Goku gets so distracted. XD |
| CornflowerBlue 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abusehehe...peaches...aww, that was so kawaii!! nehh, I reckon Kanzeon would've been amused at such a scene! haha! "She's the Goddess of Mercy, after all." |
| Alex 2006-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow incredibly cute! I love your Saiyuki stories! |
| Zelgadis55 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abusePlaying a bit of trying to catch up on reading and finally read this story. I only really have one thing to say and that is, Aww, that is soo cute! It's always nice when Goku can make Sanzo smile. Sorry I didn't get around to reading this earlier. Thanks for sharing. Zell |
| Peach Cake 2005-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Thank you for the great read! ^.^ lol, you like my unsigned review name? OF COURSE I WANT PEACH CAKE! Ok... if that scared you, I'm terribly sorry... bye. p.s. WONDERFUL STORY |
| Sohmachi 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this! It's so cute and ... well ... charming! =D |
| Luthien-Ikari 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abusePEACH CAKE! *hugs Goku* |
| driftingwanderer 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuselight hearted and nice. keep it up. |
| EdenEight 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abuseAdorable. Nothing more needs to be said. Simply adorable. |
| vampiricgreenmamba 2004-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseKyuu! Son Goku is so sweet and cute and adorable.^_^ ( Son Goku is my ona-san). And Sanzo, never seen him act so nice before (he is my lover so HANDS OFF! )Anyway, great fanfic. |
| ^_^ 2004-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw that was really cute! please write more fics if you have the time. |
| dark amethyst 2004-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it so much! the ending was really sweet! though Sanzo was a bit out of character, it was still ok. hope to see more of you! ^_^ Ja *dark amethyst* |
| Gillian Sillis 2004-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, this was really sweet! I just wanted to hug Goku for being so cute and then Sanzo who did his best to resisit Goku but couldn't in the end, MARVELLOUS! I also loved the end where Goku tells Sanzo they'll share the peach. It was so touching, I really had a tear in my eye when I read that part. Hope you'll write some other stuff to with the characters from Saiyuki! |
| Me-Nuriko 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseSharing the peaches. Sweet. ยจ_^ A very young Sanzo, with a newly found Goku. This scene shows a typical Sanzo, 'I'll do what I want to'. Goku is so sweet, and Sanzo's caring is obvious (but don't tell him I said so). |