Hey lady--Today was a slow day at work, so I reread one of my favorite fics, and was reminded all over again what a fantastic writer you are and how much I hope you finish this someday :)

I know I left a comment before, but then I lost interest in fandom and when I came back, yours was the first story I checked and re-read.

I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this fic -which is definitely one of the best fics I've ever read - possibly the best even. There are just so many things I loved about it, one of them being your OCs, particularly Oerin Lin. (I admit that I'm a little upset -heartbroken even *g*- that we'll probably never find out more about him. It's a bit embarrassing how many scenarios I ran in my head about 'what' he really is, his background -kneeling before Sunrider statue?- and his purpose. Well, seeing as I couldn't come up with any satisfactory answer, now I use his name for my male exile ^_^) I usually dislike OCs in fics but in this particular one, I'm amazed how they completely overshadowed the other characters sometimes.

I know I'm being the selfish reader here but I still like to cling to last bits of hope I have that maybe you'll update someday or maybe we'll see some one-shots concerning the 'Memory' universe. Anyway, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with rich characters and breathtaking plot that took me to a great journey :)

This was one of the first KOTOR stories I read, and finally found it again. sad to see it hasn't been updated, please do something...anything this story is too good to let fall to the wayside. Give in to peer pressure and write more. monkey whip your muse, bribe it with whatever it wants. I sat and re-read this and I love it from start to what we have. MORE.
I'll give you my rare Krayt Dragon crystal and my stuffed Mission Vao doll (don't ask). but please this is too good of a story not to continue.

Revan was a male, according to the official thing. But the Exile was a woman. Just letting you know.

First off, let me say that this story is pure perfection from start to finish. I've spent the last four days reading it. If my computer weren't so damn heavy, I wouldn't be ableto put it down.

Polla and family are some of the coolest OCs I've ever read. The same goes for the Mandos, but it especially shines through with D'Reev. He's very antagonistic, and self-serving, but he's just doing what he was taught to, so there's a certain tragic aspect to it that I enjoy.

I absolutely adore the idea of Mission becoming a rampant supercomputer from 30,0 years past.

Polla's 'death' was an absolute stroke of genius. I really love how Molla slipped in the message about crying that only Revan would get. And the misdirection that lead us to suspect foul play on the part of Mission or someone else was brilliantly done.

Speaking of strokes of genius, Boxboy-Niko is ass-slappingly awesome.

All in all, this is one of the best stories I've ever seen. Thank you for writing it.

You HAVE to update!! Please!! I have been hooked on this story for weeks! You have done a great job so far. I have to know what happens to Revan and Carth and their children.

Wow,I just read the first chapter of Memory. Very powerfully written. I really love that you show Carth and Revan still loving each other, even after her recent fall back to the darkside. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

/me Jedi Mind Trick
You will post another chapter...
You will post another chapter...
You will post another chapter...

Three time's the charm right? But no seriously, this chapter is godly, just like all your other chapters. I've read this nearly a YEAR ago though... Come on, please...

You will post another chapter...

This story left me speechless from the first paragraph. Your narration is very powerful, and the plot is unique. Your portrayal of Malak is also one of the big factors that I was so captivated by it. I hope you finish this fantastic story someday.

You cant leave me haning like this forever!
Please please PLEASE write some more, im dying! :D

Okay, finally got around to reading it properly. :P

First, what I might have said before -- I really like how you deal with everyone's baggage. The kind of things these people have gone through isn't something that can be brushed under the rug, so to speak, and your handling of their issues is superb. Some things, on paper, are pretty far-fetched concepts (Malak returning to take care of his son, for example), but you pull it off very well. Love the media/transcript treatment and various versions of the "heroes'" lives in the holovids. Very novel, very well-executed. Also love the multi-faceted plot and the very many viewpoints, particularly with the way you give them all equal attention and depth. The Rakatan in Niko's body is very intriguing; I don't think many people have picked up that as a plotbunny. I can't say I'm very fond of the Carth/Revan cuddling scenes (argh, my teeth are rotting), but then again, I'm not fond of the pairing, period. Revan's angst gets somewhat repetitive in the middle, but it's good to see that she's getting back some strength that makes it convincing she is the same person as the Revan who did all the things in the wars.

And, of course, there's the Coruscanti politics, which are very, very cool. I like pretty much everything about it -- the games, the senators' clones, the Eglatine/Amaltine institutes system, and so on. Twisty and brutal. Malachi and Lin, among others, shine as strongly the canon characters; you have a real gift for OCs -- they all feel integrated into the story, and each has his or her purpose, as well as full-fledged personalities, motivations, and roles. It's really quite amazing how you develop cultures out of very bare essentials the canon gives us (the Mandalorians, in particular. I really like Aemelie). You also have a great knack for making everything very Star Warsy without resorting to Earth references (proverbs, metaphors, using planet-specific names, etc). It's nicely immersive.

There're some things that keep nagging at me, though. First, the nicknames. A few people might call each other by diminutives; great, no problem with that. But when practically everybody and their fifth cousin does it, it becomes aggravating. There are people who don't use nicknames for even their nearest and dearest, y'know? It's a small thing, but it keeps piling up and piling up (Mekk, Dust, Dusty, Rev, Leenie, Thallie, Cand, Rev, Revvie, Mallie, will it never *stop*? Bloody hell, even Vrook uses "Lora" for Elora. I'm surprised you haven't sprung "Carthie" at us yet :P), and there're points where I want to reach through the monitor and slap something.

Another thing is labeling each scene with the viewpoint character's name. I just don't see the necessity for this; your characters' voices are, for the most part, more than sufficiently distinct. It's not that difficult to tell whose eyes the reader's looking through. The use of the viewpoint tags almost always comes across as clumsy. (Yes, I know GRRM does it, but, well, he's GRRM.) There're quite a large handful of punctuation, typographical and grammatical errors, so maybe you could look those over a bit.

I read this on KFM first. I still love it & hope you complete it one day.

First off, poorly executed bandwagon jumping. This is excellent. You work angst and humour together really well. The occasional comments by Malak, Revan's thoughts and the small interactions just tighten it all up. Good luck with tying up the loose ends, and i hope you enjoy it.
P.S. The descriptions of Revan's holomask cracked me up, because it sounds to look exactly like one of the female!Exile faces from KotOR II. (it's late... well, early. Coherence isn't to be expected). The Ship Who Sang, and a bit of Partnership (for some odd reason...) are lurking with large pikes in regard to the Mission-computer. Nicely flawless idea appropriation. :)

*pokes the part of Kosiah's brain that produces Memory* is this a dead fic?

An intricate plot. I hope you finish someday.