 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2006-11-21 . chapter 1 i agree with delumacar on the first past, its way too short. but on the second part it doesnt take out interest it leaves you hanging and makes you want to find out what happens next. |
 delumacar 2004-12-04 . chapter 1It´s way too short, that takes the interest out of it. |
 I HAVE LEFT FANFIC DELETE 2004-10-13 . chapter 1Nah, I don't think you are a self-denying-Sirius fan. I think he's alive too! Good point! HAHAHAHAHA! Another point to Kelsey! MWAHHAAHAHA! O_O I know I'm crazy. I'm just very hyper right now |
 SweetSouthernGal 2004-10-13 . chapter 1i think (or atleast hope) that hes coming back too. |