I think it's really good. It's not meant to be Aurikku though, is it? Because the Aurikkuness of it, if it's even there, is very very subtle. But I really like it. I think Auron is very in character. Good job.

Misery is poetry. I really liked it.

yay! for poems!!

i love this great write some more!

Intresting poem

woah! this is really well thought out! congrats!