lol poor Lloyd xD

Excellent! But one thing it really needs...MORE!!
"Uh-oh", You've left me hanging!
This can develop well. One chapter won't do it for the way you have this chapter written. I can see it as little as 3 or 4 chapters if you wanted to keep it short.

So please, for us SheLloyd's... add more!

Listen i know you wrote this about 4 years ago but CONTINUE IT!
DO IT FOR THE LITTLE PEOPLE!

Gah, so inconclusive! I wish you could have atleast included a more complete ending, but otherwise pretty nice.

nice fic. trouble for the group now has surfaced. that was nice mixing colette and sheena together in lloyd's feelings for who he liked better

I'm going to say this: despite the fact that I haven't played the game Tales of Symphonia, this is one of the most innocent fics that I've ever read. Now this is a rather interesting fic that you've put up here and everytime that I've read it, it keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for you to put in a story that would continue after this one. Boy, would Lloyd be in for a world of hurt for when he gets in between two girls that are fighting for him. I'm actually considering of putting the characters of the game into one of my fics as one of the past ones. I'm not sure how I'm going to do it, but I'll try. I've got to say that it's thanks to fics like yours that help me to get into the Tales of Symphonia game in the first place. I hope that you get to put in the story or chapter. Why don't you read one of my own fics and see what you think about it? Well, later!

Maurice A. Nigma

Very good, I hope you change this from a one-shot to a full fic.

Hehe. I like the ending line. The first words that many children learn seem to sum up half the problems that even adults find themselves in. LOL. Nicely written, the character's personalities seem to be well done, though I have to admit that Lloyd seemed just a little bit out of character. I dunno, he just didn't seem to be naive enough, but it is understandable since he is maturing slowly, and it is possible that he would become mature enough to question his feelings like that. Good job, I rather enjoyed this story.

hey
this was awsome!
i really liked it it. ^_^
Im a mass pro Lloyd x Sheena so it GREAT to see them have a great chance for a change ^^

Great start! I hope you continue this. SheenaXLloyd is my favorite couple. Keep it up!

thats a good fic. although i think you should follow it up by telling what happens next with collete and sheena and lloyd's feelings as well. i'd like to know.

This is really good. I'm kinda sad that you made it only one chapter. This story was written very well, though. If theres a sequel, I'll be really glad. Please make it into a Lloyd/Sheena story. Sheena's a better choice than Colette in plenty of ways.

MUST HAVE MORE CHAPTERS! Not one-shot, it is good you must continue. Make it into a nice Sheloyd, and add more chapters and make Tenderloin! You have to sort out all the characters feelings and stuff, and then type more chapters. (eye twitch) more chapters...

Cute. Very cute. I liked it, though I do think Lloyd/Sheena/Colette are slightly OOC in this one, but that can be forgiven since it's quite well-written anyway.

Please make this a Lloyd/Sheena Fic! I beg of you, please! And please don't make this a one-shot! I'll never stop crying if you do. WHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHA!