really like the stories, they keeps getting better. Honks is definitely my favorite paring and I hope you keep coming out with great stories.

Damn I was angry when you ended the story this way. But when I read the last lines of this chapter I'm looking forward to a prospective sequel :P yay

thank you

Damn I was angry when you ended the story this way. But when I read the last lines of this chapter I'm looking forward to a prospective sequel :P yay

thank you

Damn I was angry when you ended the story this way. But when I read the last lines of this chapter I'm looking forward to a prospective sequel :P yay

thank you

I take back what I said

I love tonks storys I dont know why I have never read this before my only guess can be that I was waiting for a sequel oh well I liked the first chapter Im gonna read this great job

great story

Ouch, that was rough. Okay, I doubt the alternate Tonks is dead because that spell only said it made her dissappear...I am surprised so few have seen this. That does not mean that she was not banished someplace very unkind though. Harry still has not had his greatest power awaken, so there is still that, and it was said that it would take the power of him and Tonks to destroy Voldemort...a clue that she is not dead.

Hi mate, this is a great story, just want to know if Tonks (Linda) is going to be seen again? If not would you mind if I kidnapped her for one of my stories.

Are you sure English is the native language of the USA?
Because it already started hurt to read the first half of the first chapter.
I figured it would get better, hopefully, so I read on.
But ater I began with the second one, I really started to question my sanity.
Please get a beta or two.


As for the story, not to bad so far, with few exceptions.
You can call it pettiness but I think you shouldn't forget some of the details.
Exmples:
Harry's security detail (Order of the Kentucky fried Turkey)
I don't think, that they would let him leave without trouble.

What happend to te phone booth?
As I recall it that's the way to enter to MoM, if you can't apparate or use the floo.


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I can't tell if your using your screen name as a person in your story or if you are using some other book's person as your screen name and it is now part of your story. I guess what I'm saying is, are you making up some one or is that new person from another story different than Harry Potter?

I found some thing you do a hell of a lot of times and I really didn't want to say anything, but it happen's a lot. The passed tence of think is thought. You keep for getting the t at the end and putting though instead. It's probably some thing like your typing to fast and just not catching it, but I figured I could let you know. CAn't hurt right? Good chapter overall.

You do horror well. Again I'm sorry if I spelt some thing wrong. Anyway, you do scarry ** really well and I am not one to be frightened by writing. Good job on this chapter and the cliff hanger was at the perfect point in the chapter.

In the book they have a "staff room" that serves the same perpose.

Why would you expect flames for this chapter? I personally think this is your best chapter for this story thus far. I'm not sure how much that means to you, but it's the trueth. And for some reason I think I spelt that wrong, but I don't ** care it's 2ish in the morning and I've been up sense 6 yesterday morning. Good work though, finally I feel that I can bring myself to add this story to my fave list.