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| gabrieldarke 2008-07-05 ch 5,  | abuseaww... i loved this fic.. ill admit i havent really read any of the spider man fics... but i love the movies... and what few comic books ive read.. lol.. anyway.. i liked this fic and i loved the maggie and the scrapbook things... later!!.. keep writing... later!! |
| Creative Spark 2008-07-03 ch 5, | abuseThat was really great, and well writen too! It's nice to see people helping out Peter once and a while. Nice Work. -Spark |
| A Brighter Dawn 2008-06-29 ch 5, | abusePerfect. Completely and utterly perfect. This is exactly the fic I've been wanting to read after seeing the second movie. Thank you so much for posting this! Brilliant writing. |
| HitokiriKurisuta 2008-06-10 ch 5, | abuseI cannot begin to describe how awesome I thought this was. Seriously. |
| hypercell 2008-05-30 ch 5, | abuse"Yowza!!" Loved it! It was great!! |
| hypercell 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseThis was an awesomely funny chapter! LOL |
| hypercell 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was soo sweet!! |
| Inarae 2008-05-14 ch 5, | abuseI'm sure I've reviewed before, but I wanted to add this to my favorites. It's wonderful, anyhow |
| clurr 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abusei really liked this story. i'd never read any of the spiderman fics but your concept intrigued me and it was really well written. nice job. |
| hoheehum 2008-04-18 ch 5, | abuseThis is great! I wasn't quite sure where you were going with it, around chapter 3, but the ending was just perfect :-D That authentic sort of Spidey feel-goodness, with some human truths mixed in to keep it out of coma-inducing syrupiness. Nice, very nice. |
| PinkSakuraPetals 2008-04-13 ch 5, | abuseThat made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...such a cute little fic. Great work! |
| chalicity 2008-04-10 ch 5, | abusea very sweet and adorable, well-written, feel-good piece. thank you for sharing it! :) |
| Hemlock27 2008-04-07 ch 5, | abuseMy god this is FANTASTIC. Really, it is. Wow. This is so fluffy and cute and perfectly executed in the style as well. Just-wow. You managed to describe the perfect characterization that I believe fits Peter Parker to a tee. Witty banter, excellent dialogue, I am a stickler when it comes to well written script and this was so well done. Was it fun to write? Because it sure as hell was fun to read! I can't find anything to pick on other than a few typos I saw-like, 3 in all 5 chapters, and it was obvious in what you meant and your story was so good I didn't even notice it really-I didn't dwell on it. There were things to read, after all. I love Maggie. Her character is an OC, yeah, but she's so perfect in her character that I could completely see her as a real character in the series-movie, comic, show-you name it. Whatever floats your talented boat. Jackie was funny too-their banter was fun to read. The scrap book? Whoa, so cool and cute and fluffy-I adored it. So thoughtful and a good idea-well done, I commend you. All in all, I'm glad I read your story and I am looking forward to reading your works in the future. Not now, though. I'm kind of tired-but later. Absolutely. to reiterate: this is golden. I loved it-keep writing. You obviously have a knack for it. -Hemlock27 |
| R-Gomeni 2008-03-15 ch 5, | abuseI don't really read Spiderman stories- as a matter of fact, this is the first one I've read. Still, it's really really good. Thanks for a great read :) |
| killing u with umbrellas 2008-03-08 ch 5, | abusei love it. |