Aw. How sweet. I loved it.

I loved this... I sort suspected that Shuichi was dead by the time I reached the scene in the study and at breakfast, but the imagery and flow in this is so touching that it knocks away predictability. (^^)

very nice, though plotless. a nice little feel-good read. *claps* keep it up.

Again something very nice that I am really enjoying reading. I enjoy your writings even if they are very sad.

Nicely put. Sadly,I didn't catch on until the shower scene. I hope I interpreted the situation correctly: Shuichi is dead, a ghost, and currently following Yuki around. Damn.

I've just stumbled onto the Gravitation fanverse a while ago, but if it's worth anything, this makes much better reading material than what I've seen around.

Pre-teen hormonones: Wah! Cries. So sad. Blabbers.

Ahh... I caught on at the breakfast scene. Once I began the story, I knew something was up, but I could not place my finger on it. Then, I realized that it was similar to Ghost... or that video by, er... Nickelback? Yeah, that one. Sadly, once I realized that, it was all the more depressing... which is good. *thumbs up*

I quite enjoyed this little fic. Perhaps you could write a prologue to the story? It would be interesting to find out how Shu ended up as he is. Then again, this piece is excellent by itself.

Gotta run... I'm going to check out your bio/stories authored page!
-Andie

Eiri's so mean! I know he's got a cold personality, but he should at least acknowledge Shuichi's existence! Poor Shu-chan!Y_Y It was very well written, though. You really captured the feeling of Shuichi being totally ignored. It felt as if Eiri wouldn't even notice if Shuichi just left for good. Very well portrayed! Good luck on your other fics! Ja ne!

Aw, so sad but so sweet at the same time! I love this fic!

wait! theres something in the fic i dont understand. theres something that doesnt seem to add up. nice ending though but why does it feel confusing?

that was cute!you should write more!

i hope that i didn't understand the story wrongly! there was a twist at the end, right? So sad!

I'm with you - totally hate the new system. It looks ugly! Anyway, you know I really liked this one shot of yours even though it made me a little sad. You are really good at this type of writing where you lead the reader to beliveone thing and then crash them even more at the end. I hope to be seeing one of theother one-shots posted soon.

This was a nice little fic ^^ I was wondering, though...where was Shuichi at the end?? I hope you didn't kill him! X.x I once read this one fic...everything seemed alright throughout the whole thing...then at the end...Shuichi wasn't really there at all! ;-; Eh...good fic anyway ^^;

Hahahaha. I remember reading this a while back and was all WAH.