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prieda
2007-01-21 . chapter 2
yay, more blinkered Enjy! You are really good at getting under the skin of all the student characters, and giving them all a character. Quite a few LM fanfics just portray the students as sort of one large mass, so your fics are great in that every student is different and defined.

Blaerg i'm blathering now, and my spelling stinks. 'I cannot put my personal happiness before the good of the whole' Aw, poor Enjy-that guy seriously needs to watch 'Life Of Brian'!
Pimpernelunderthecelticmoon
2005-05-13 . chapter 1
I never heard him play anything but the tuba.
Michi
2004-12-31 . chapter 1
Perfect choice of piece; the Chaconne is so Enjolras. Nice turns of phrase and word choices! Even though it sounds like your voice (which is good), sometimes the "of course" and other phrases seem a little out of place in such a reverent and somber piece. But it does lend sort of a human element to such a heavenly matter, and the contrast is nice...
LesMisLoony
2004-11-16 . chapter 2
*see review on your xanga*
You posted it, yay! And I'm incredibly sorry about your tendonitis... man, that sucks.
I saw you ask on my xanga what instrument I play... I'm a violist, and I heart my instrument.

But yeah, this is great, as I said on your site.
Cecilia Carlton
2004-11-13 . chapter 2
I share everyone else's sympathies over the end of your career. =( Sorry.

But the fic was lovely. "You should lock your door at night" -- made me smile, and balanced out the sober tone of the piece nicely.
Mlle. Verity
2004-11-13 . chapter 2
Very good story. Many sympathies about your loss of a career. Ouch.
Queen of the Doomed
2004-11-12 . chapter 1
loved it loved it!
God your writing is loverly. If i had half your talent i would flaunt it like W cup boobies!
-love ya!
-brooke
TheSanityStealingPenguinQueen
2004-11-12 . chapter 2
Very nice. I like it. And my word is law.

I agree with Ceilia Carlton, a guitar playing Enjorlas would be cool (maybe that's just my guitar playing, ego centric self speaking). I had a fic in whick Grantiare played guitar, but I never posted it.
AmZ
2004-11-12 . chapter 2
sorry about your career... but what is the philosophical conundrum?.. i'll try to catch your performnace!
YoukoElfMaiden
2004-11-12 . chapter 2
Hey! This is really nice, an interesting subject. I've never read a fic when they were still in the university. Good job!
Cecilia Carlton
2004-11-09 . chapter 1
Very nice. I really liked this piece. Also like the reaction against the pianist-Enjolras pieces. Haha. (My Enjolras was going to play guitar, but I never wrote it...) Really, very, very nice.
KatsuraKotaro
2004-11-07 . chapter 1
Do I sense hints of Enjolras/Grantaireness? ^^ A lovely short story. I particularly like the clever way you ended it ... the end of the music=the end of the story. Very cool.
LesMisLoony
2004-10-22 . chapter 1
INteresting. As everyone seems to have mentioned... I don't know if I've ever seen Enj as a pianist... that'd be cool though *is a raving obsessive lover of all that is piano* But Jehan has to be a violist. Because I play the viola too, and Jehan should be a violist. Yes, he should. Ah, well, now I'm off to play DYHTPS on my viola.
As usual, I love your writing, of course!
rachel
2004-10-16 . chapter 1
awesomely good
Davey-kins
2004-10-16 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT!! God, you're so talented...I lurves you, Heather! AH! YOU'RE SO INCREDIBLY TALENTED!
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