hm. interesting... I'm not really sure what to make of this story. It is well writen and has good plot... i'm just not sure what to make of the whole conversation between Drac and Tamika. Good job... Keep it up!

Kairi's Twin

Ha! He deserved it!

i wouldn't belitle urself. this is great, especaly for a 14 yearold! i want 2 find out more bout this Tamika. I'm gonna check ur profile for more fics on her, if u don't have ne, i'm adding u to my author alert list in hopes that you one day do.

Wow, I really liked this. You are a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more from you! :)