Excellent, but one small quibble. I found the extremely long paragraphs difficult to follow. Maybe break them up somehow... It might make things a little clearer. But otherwise, excellent and well-written.

Nice fic. I love the title.
You should label this "AU" in the summary, though, just so people know.

OMG! That was amazing! I really liked it. you have to continue writing for you are really god!!
K eep it up!

Eponinerose29

Well written.

I am very impressed: in character Eponine, who's not pretty and doesn't get the guy! Good plot that hasn't been done before. I give you props! Mucho props!

eh...I...ah... , ... wow.

this is so heart wrenching. I...am...speechless.

please keep posting, don't leave me dangling.

Beautiful descriptions and a wonderful insight in Eponine's thoughts and feelings. I wasn't expecting Montparnasse to do that to her ... it makes me feel for her even more.

True to the book! That is the highest compliment anyone can give to an Eponine fic, because they are so rare.

Good work, and I hope you will continue this story. :)

Fascinating. This has definite potential. Props for writing in-character Eponine, and do update soon.

Very interesting. I like your writing style, and a loud hip hip huzzah for remembering that Eponine did indeed lure Marius to his death.

The errors in grammar/ punctuation/ spelling aren't too terribly bad; I've seen them in fics by English- speakers. If you have issues with English grammar still (it's one demmed tricky language, m'dear) try getting an English- born (or American-born) beta- reader. I'll volunteer! This story is fantastic.

Oh. Nice. Everyone seems to forget that Eponine did indeed lead Marius to his death. So props to you for remembering this, and for making a fic out of it. Very cool. And many native speakers of English would make the same mistakes you did. (Why can't the English teach their children how to speak?)