Excellent. Love how you implied subtlties and imagery. I am a total whore of imagery. Splendid job.

(Renata)

WOW! WOW! WOW! Insane, insane, insane! I LOVE insane people...probably becauase I'm crazy myself! Heh heh. Brilliant story! Very fascinating and enigmatic. You definitely have me on my toes...Rin is absolutely SHOCKING and Sesshoumaru is well...quite a mystery, as always. :Laughs: Gosh, this is awesome! Heh heh. :] Me very happy to have read this. :Giggles like the lunatic she is:

-From The Sinful Shelves Of The Library Demonica-

(Renata)

TT-TT, I'm truly sorry, but I don't understand this chapter.
TT-TT, I read it at least 3 times over...

I read the other four chapters fine!
In fact I read the other four chapters, 3 times over too~!!

BUT WHATTHEEFF? Is she offering sexual favors? Huh, I don't see any~ >.>

I like the Rin-not-so-mentally-balanced. :)

I can't help wondering what Rin did to disobey Sess, and what lord she is supposed to marry. Come on Rin, use your feminine wiles!

Um...Hm...uh...yeah...update soon!

zomg
I love it ;)

This is so original, it's different :D i love you so much!
finally a breath of fresh air

RIN'S NOT MENTALLY SANE
yes yes yes yes yes yes!
T_T you make me cry with tears of joy.

She's not mentally sane, but she still adores Sesshomaru
She lives and dies ~ something that Tenseiga didn't have the power to do
but all the well, I love it.
T_T i love you
3 years of reading nonesense Sess X Rin pairings
3 years of commenting people over their grammer and their loss of originality
i love you
I LOVE YOU

Whoa. I guess Tenseiga can only heal flesh wounds after all.

Lovely stuff. I paticularly enjoy your asides at the end. Please continue!

These snippets are like seed pearls. I can see them developing into long rewarding stories, but they're wonderful in their own right too! So satisfying.

Er. Right. Interesting, intriguing. I can see how love-possession could turn to love-hate-something very twisted on both sides.

This was absolutely intriguing. I love the image at the end, with Sesshoumaru charging, eyes glowing red. The quotes are apt, too, which is not something that you find all the time.

Rin has picked up some of Sesshoumaru's way of thinking, hasn't she? At least she's (reasonably) certain that he can revive her, even if she's not sure he will.

Thanks for a very different view.

Very nicely written. I like the references to Sun Tzu. Sacrifice always makes for a good story. Evil story. Whichever you prefer.