whot! i love this story! i just found it and i read it all in less than 20 minutes cuz i loved it so damn much! Thankyou so much for writing this, i enjoyed it more than i can say! =]

Please little story have a seat over there with your mate "seven deaths" in my favorite-stories-folder. Actually this is not just one of my favorite stories but already after the second chapter this has become my overall favorite story. And you my friend are now one of my favorite authors!

Hahah! I love this. Soo many cracks and the characterisation is wonderful! If only I can write as consistently as you. :) Favoriting this story. <3

Absolutely amazing; I love Zoro/Sanji friendship fics! This was really great, and I enjoyed it fully.

Reading this one now; I wasn't going to comment until the end (though I'm enjoying it very much so far), but when I saw the word "verisimilitude" I had to say something. My boyfriend uses it all the time to impress people, but I had never see in used anywhere else, so I was like, "OMG!"
Anyway, I'll write something more meaningful when I finish the last chapter.

Awesome story, like its predecessor, though I laughed so hard at the first couple of chapters I didn't think it would get as serious as it did once the eels gave it everything they had.
It was awfully amusing the way they were both throwing insults at each other despite their captors' best efforts to make them suffer.
Wonderful story... just the kind I love. Maybe not the torturing bit, but angst and humour, carefully balanced on good characterization and great prose, with a happy ending for me to squee about... I'd say it's an instant favourite. :)

oh, you know what you should do ... you should make another chapter of the boys recovery. It would be a nice finishing touch.

I really liked this story, you have a awesome writing style.

ahh! it was so good! i don't think you specifically meant them to be seen as a couple here- but you can't blame me for reading between the lines... the last sentence was really great.

"just tell them we're looking forward to seeing tony again." that was a great line-very clever. (makes me think of west side story)

excellent.

wow... where do i begin? the dialogue is amazing. the way you capture the subtlety of their relationship just sends me over the moon. i really, really enjoyed reading this. beautiful work!!

well, I know nothing about One Piece and I only read this because you mentioned Jim and Blair in the summation, but I enjoyed the story none the less :P

"haystack pirate"? Somehow I don't think Luffy would be pleased.

I also love how Zoro and Sanji are basically ignoring their supposed torturers in favor of bantering with each other. Reminds me of Loguetown - poor Mr. 5 and Miss Valentine...

This absurdity you call it was freaking Amazing!! ah i loved it i was giddy the whole way through i couldnt stop! im still giggeling! oh that was a Fun story it was it was it was!

Wow! That was awesome! *instant fav*