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Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 6
"Kikyo and Naraku"
OMG! That's an interesting pairing...I wonder how that would be like. =P

Hah hah. It was only to obvious Kagome and Inuyasha were going to be paired up together. =P I could foretell it from the start. Congrads on making this chapter a little more lengthy!! It makes it more interesting. ^^

Just a little advice though from one friend to another: When you are writing you do not need to state the location like this:

-In Kagome's Car--

That's for playwrights only. Lol. You can just say it in a sentance like so:

"As soon as Kagome had finished talking with Kouga, she quickly zoomed off towards her vechile, jerked open the handle and slid inside."

Or something along those lines, but you get the picture. That's only some advice though for you editing. ^^
Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 5
HAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHA SANGO SLAPPING MIROKU! HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
That's grand. =P
Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 4
Hey homie, good chappie again. ^^ Miroku getting in trouble for 'touching the merchandise' again, erm? Surprise, surprise. *cough* *cough* NOT *cough* *cough* Hahahahahaha, the argument between Kagome and Inuyasha was realistic. I could totally imagine them doing that! ^^ Hahahahahahahahaha, good job at capturing that!
Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 3
LOL. Oh, Inuyasha and Kagome alone in the principal's office. Oh, the wicked mess we weave... ;) *wink* I think that's cute.
Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 2
Wow, some modern stuff. ^^ I like that idea. ^^
Kayla-kun ^^
2005-06-08 . chapter 1
Very cool chappi, the beginging is funny so far. Hah hah. I'll keep on reading...
blackcoat-245
2004-11-02 . chapter 5
great chapter and funny 2!luv ur story hope u update soon!
stephen
2004-10-26 . chapter 4
I loved it but the other ppl in the story arnt used to much AND UPDATE KNOW!
Yumi's Twin-Kagome
2004-10-20 . chapter 3
I LOVE The FANFIC UPDATE :(#) [my face for A.S.A.P. or, in other words, NOW!]
PixiePam
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
That was kinda a cliffy!! No fair! Update soon please!!
sarah
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
ur story is really really really good,i like how u make inuyasha seem bad!hope u update soon!^_^
sarah
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
ur story is really really really good,i like how u make inuyasha seem bad!hope u update soon!^_^
sarah
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
ur story is really really really good,i like how u make inuyasha seem bad!hope u update soon!^_^
sarah
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
ur story is really really really good,i like how u make inuyasha seem bad!hope u update soon!^_^
inuyashlovr07
2004-10-17 . chapter 2
WOW, THAT...W-WAS..SO COOL AND CUTIE TOO!
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