nicely written! ^_^ love it.

OMG. i love the poem. at first i was like 'who wrote that song? i wanna download it.' and then i saw that you had wrote it, and i was all 'dang...i wanted to listen to it...' so, congradulations for completely fooling me.^_^
anywhoo- i like your story thingie. not many people focus on the fact that yes- zidane did indeed grow up on the streets. good job.

I loved this. The poem was so wonderfully written! I love the angst kind of poems, and that one really held the emotion that I can imagine Zidane felt throughout his life. Well done!

Emzies: Mwahahaha Anger. see if have give you another review for another story. I love anger.
Mog: i don't it reminds me of Eiko.
::both shiver::
Emzies: i like this its' cool. I think the best thing about final fantasy 9 was Zidane and Steiner getting into fights all the time.

It is good. Pretty in character too

hi! guess who! (its not fair, u can jus look up and no who it is. so dont look!) really good! it drove me nuts when Stiener was being an a=ss (o she uses not-very-harsh-language). im hyper can u tell? thanx 4 FINALLY reviewing my story! hey guess what! i jus found out im a supertaster! isnt tht great?! hey i think im gonna call u so answer ur phone. i hav a funny story (well... itll b funny 2 u but it was evil when it happened) concerning mrs. k. im bored so im gonna go call u now. bye bye!
-hyper lamia (there's a difference)
oh yeah... b careful or the mouse might eat u

Awsome so far. I always found the way they treated each other facinating, expecially at the end of the game, where Garnet and Steiner aid Zidane when he was losing who he was. I thought that part was so cool. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Homan, write more, please!

heh heh. cool
I like the poem, why cant i make 'em as effective as that?
Some reason the fic reminds me of one time back in the summer holidays... -grins slightly- ...ANYWAY!! talk soon!

-x-
You don't need a reason to eat people

Good work!
Enjoying this, please continue soon!
'Bout time Zidane told Rusty off!! ^_^