WOW!

Pity you didnt finish this to when they got off the plane

great story

Have Mercy! WOW! Please add more to this story.

One word...WOW!

whoa...you can't stop there! this story is great...

This was off to an amazing start, then I looked at it and it said 'abandoned'...it has so much potential to go further! So I have a question to ask you: If you're not going to continue this, would you mind if I took over and continued writing? This story has so much potential. I'll understand if you say no, but I'd be quite honored if you'd think about it.

Reguards,
WolvGambit

It is such a shame you didn't finish THIS one!

HAHAHAHA. That was great. OMG. I am cracking up so much. I have to say though: I can't imagine either of them doing that at all. It's hilarious though!

was that it? really love this story mate...smut..sexy.. MORE!

This is turning out to be really good. Hope to see more chapters to come soon.

wowzer

Very hot, and naughty.
Nice :)

good...funny. keep it up.

*falls off chair laughing* on my god i haven't
laughed so had in age's..let me know when you
update.

OMG! AH! That was good. Lol. Update soon!

Damn! They better get to the bathrrom quick! Poor Grissom or lucky Grissom.

Looking eagerly for the next chapter.