a little confusing, but good. if you explaned the back plot... well. i'm left wondering if it was that they were reencarnated or if one of them lost their memory... but it was good. albet confusing,
:) smile

I REALLY liked this installation of the series. I really hope you keep this one going!

weird... it took reading that two times before i understood it, but once i did, i was startled at the brilliance of it all... lovely work, truly beautiful!!

Sapphire

This is so awsome you have to update soon.

nice

Interesting. Unusual. I liked it :-)

Isis

Planning on continuing it, or is it a one shot?

Ooh! That was delicious. You wouldn't want to write more to that, would you?

Definitely beautiful. And definitely work of a poet ^^

Can't wait to read next chapter!