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Munkustrapthecat
2007-09-14
ch 7,
abusethat was so sad!
Adi Sagestar
2007-08-22
ch 7,
abuse:)
Mystar
2005-04-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat..that...*sniff* that's just too sad to be true! Macavity is such a meanie!*sob* Oh well. Keep Writing! It's Great!
Lozzypop
2004-12-23
ch 7,
abuseUm, good chapter, good *wipes eyes* allergies, yeh I have allergies, I'm not crying or anything like that *sobs*
Well not one of the most lighthearted fics out there (like I'm one to talk, lol), but I really enjoyed it. Good for Demeter, who'd have thought she could take down the Napoleon of Crime? And I suppose it is kind of a happy ending, coz she gets to be with the ones she loves. But they're all dead *sobs*
Ah well, hope to read more fics from you soon, keep up the good work *grins*
elemental-fey
2004-12-23
ch 7,
abuseI reveiwed this earlier, and at the time I was truly enjoying your writing style, and the story it's self... but I am vastly disappointed in the ending as I felt that with your talent you could have been far more creative.
Attila the Conqueror
2004-12-23
ch 7,
abuseYou killed Macavity *cries* That's so sad. But Demeter's dead too, so it isn't so bad. This was a long chapter in comparison to the others! Hurah! All in all, a great story! I loved it! And I'm glad that you finished it up so quickly! Hurah!
But Macavity is dead...so sad.
Chimalmaht
2004-12-23
ch 7,
abuseIs that the end? It's sad. But kind of happy at the same time. I'm still slightly in shock, so sorry this review can't be more of what I'm thinking. This was an awesome story!
Krissy4
2004-12-23
ch 7,
abuseAnother bittersweet chapter; she's dead but she's happy. Good for her... I suppose. I'm just going to assume that this was the last chapter; seeing as how all the characters are now dead. So I'll close with wondeful job and I'm loving this
Krissy4
2004-12-22
ch 6,
abuseIt does make it more intense. I hope we wont be in agony for too long. It must be Macavity's way if gettin what, or who, he wants... Loving This! (and Happy Holidays)
Chimalmaht
2004-12-22
ch 6,
abuseOoh, evil, evil Macavity. I wonder if she's right though. I have this nagging suspicion that its not going to be him after all. I'm probably not right, but hey. Glad you got this up so fast. Are you going to be able to do it again? *hinthint*
Lozzypop
2004-12-22
ch 6,
abuseShe's cracked it. But going to Mac's lair, alone? Thats something that someone definitely has to be driven to. I only hope Deme can keep her cool, and get out of there ok. Argh, I need to read more.
Lozzypop
2004-12-22
ch 5,
abuseNoo, not Rumpleteazer too. I think Alonzo has the right idea, getting Deme the hell out of there, althought there is still the dreams, poor Demie.
elemental-fey
2004-12-22
ch 5,
abuseWow incredibly well done! Brava!
I am almost convinced that Demeter is killing her freinds in her sleep... kind of a like a murderous bent on sleepwalking, which is a really cool idea - now I want to know what drove her to it. (Or if I'm even right in my theory)
Attila the Conqueror
2004-12-21
ch 6,
abuseI'm mad at you. You leave me off right at the climax! That is so...GR! UPDATE THIS SOON! I mean it.
Nabooru
2004-12-20
ch 5,
abuseWhat the hell is going on?! I'm so confused. Then again, I get the feeling that's what you were going for, and everything is going to make horrible, creepy sense in the end. Which is good. Very good.

Too bad it's all so short, I would have enjoyed more detail and more to read. Ah well.

Keep up the good work; I'm looking forward to seeing more of this!
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