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| Smaragd 2007-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really depressing. And because I'm a masochist I really liked it. It was good, but now I feel like I need to read something really fluffy or funny. Damnit. |
| CornflowerBlue 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuse That was...just so...sad...but it really is wonderful. Yeah...I hope Sanzo does realize soon how precious the other three are to him. |
| stitcher2ficcer 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, this is so heartwrenching it made me cry... which is a reaction I rarely have to fanfic. I hate it and yet I love it. It's a hopeless but very compelling view of Sanzo, and a fine piece of writing. Me-Nuriko has recommended your stories to me and has been trying to get me to join the message board you started last year. I may yet wind up there. Thanks for a good but very sad read. |
| authorialintent 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, ow. What a bleak future you've painted for Sanzo. Let us hope that he realizes, as he seems to, the folly of non-attachment. Our favorite hypocrite, ne? |
| Chobit 00 2004-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseDoes this mean that everybody DIED!? Poor Goku-chan...and Sanzo-puu too... "Ripping off a birds wings is child play, but a fallen's wings are harder." -Chobit 00 |
| Nanatsusaya 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuse::gives daffodils?:: X3 I really like the way you wrote this--there is no glamor or smoothing over or the more unsavory descriptions. Well done! |
| therhoda 2004-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHow about Lilies? *hands her some white lilies* now you have to fix it! I need happiness you know. This was so well written that I read the whole thing even after I stopped wanting to. You captured the self destructive but not able to completely leave the world, feeling of true hopelessness. I hope that was what you were going for and that this one made writing peaches easier. |
| Adlige 2004-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOuch. |
| honmyo SeaGull 2004-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHo, my... This is beautifully written, or rather I think it is since English isn't my language either... I like the soft rythm of the short sentences and the feelings flushing in the longer ones... This vision of Sanzo is quite dark, but somehow it really fits him and this take on on his character is very welcome... This is a very powerful story which makes me really sad. Poor guy...but I think it was kinda the point, wasn't it? He got taught his lesson the hard way, nee? Thanks for writing and sharing... |
| Psycho-CJ 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, but great fic. Old, self-hating Sanzo is pretty scary and I feel sorry for him because no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't find a way to bring back his friends. One comment--shouldn't it be hungry-ghosts, instead of hunger-ghosts? At least, that's the way I always heard them refered to as. |
| KarotsaMused 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseo,o Yeah. I can't get enough of this fic, can you tell? I don't know why I love it so much, but I really do. ^^ |
| princesspriscillamaxwell 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseMan! This story was deep and meaningful - I LOVED IT. You've got great writing skills and you should put them into use by WRITING MORE FICS AND FEEDING THE READERS. thanks for a great fic. hope to read more. |
| Me-Nuriko 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYou call this 'a tiny little bit dark'? When I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes, telling myself 'this is *not* what is going to happen'? Could happen, because that's how they all would react, but will not happen, because Sanzo selfishness are big but still has limits. Right? *sob* |