I was really impressed with this! Despite the age of the series, I myself am a very new fan of Guilty Gear, and find myself very much intruiged by the character Sol Badguy. From what I've learned, this story seemed very true to his character, which I really appreciated.
Your writing style is something to be admired as well, fantastic job!

Cool. Rock on Sol. Never conform. Rock on.

Wow. That was great. It's pretty cool to see Sol's outtake on humanity-- the flaws of it, but the strange way it has. Personally, I'd have to agree on Sol's thinking. I'm a lemming myself sometimes, if I don't have a confidence to stand on my own. Funny way to think. The ending made me chuckle though. Ironic. Definitely gotta save this one.

So very, harshly, true to life. A beautifully captured Sol being his usual cynical self. A twisted kind of amusement that I adore so much, and is so hard to find. I love it, I really do.

Wow. Ok, I apologize in advance for writing this but...damn, this was hella good.

Incredible...what is it called..."philosophy?" included in this fic. Your got Sol's characterization down perfectly, and it all MADE SENSE. Damn.

I'm totally recomending this story 'n saving it. O_O Now, if you'll excuse me, I shall ask stalker-ish and see if you have anymore Guilty Gear stuff.

Hehe, so very very true. Lemmings = human race. A good piece that I enjoyed being able to read. No doubt that Sol would indeed think like this. Again, good piece.

I genuinely REALLY like this. It is exactly how Sol would think and act. Well done, how GGX2 characters view the world. You might actually want to take this further and get inside the heads of other characters. Well done and keep writing. Also 'Ky, Lemming In Chief Of The Holy Knight Lemmings.' That's a title that's going to stick! :)