very niceley written.

nice end

I love this set of stories, very nicely written. It's nice to see that Seto can regret thing like any other person in life.

oh my gosh, i kept expecting seto to have a nervous breakdown or something. i know i would have! this story was really awesome, you have a great talent for writing. keep up the great work! :)

O.O I didn't know you had a sequel! :@ (very infuriated) I shall go seek for more of your stories!! (runs off)

Your story is so cool! I don't know how you put all those different emotions in there. I can imagine everything so clearly. You're so lucky to have that imagination and abilty to write like you do.

Whew, it ended well. Sorry about how long it took to review. I was almost the first one, and then...my aunt's computer refused to let the pop-up review page come up.
Anyway, I thought this summed up the rest well, bringing back in past elements. Also, with the stone still around, it leaves a touch of unfinished-ness to the end, which makes it interesting.
The only thing I think you could fix is the repetition of Mokuba getting hurt by Kaiba and then getting apologized to. It was very dramatic and heart-wrenching at first, but after it became repetitive, I started to dislike Kaiba and see no hope for him.
Otherwise, the emotion in the beginning of this story was great and you carried it through to a pleasing end.
I hope you write another story soon when you're inspired!

Awe that was sweet. this was a really good fic. I really liked it. I'm in Media so I have to go now. So I'll see you later Arrow-Chan.

^_^ Great ending! I really enjoyed this whole fic!

~afk25~

^_^ It's really good! **glomps Seto-kun** aw i liked the part when Seto put that dude in the garbage can. Serves the bully right! ^_^

update soon!

~afk25~

Yippee! What a great scene at Kaiba's school when the brothers reunite.
I know this isn't your fault, but I have trouble remembering everything that happened before and is now adding up. I should reread this entire story at one time, I think.
Great emotion and last question of Mokuba! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Yeah, sorry it is taking me so long to read it. I was loving my vacation too much. Very great letter from Mokuba's mother! Maybe it will help the kid not feel so guilty.
Hope you enjoyed your vacation as well.
Sorry, I don't have much to say. I have to keep reading.

That was a great chapter. I loved it/. Kaiba making a little kid scared shitless. That's funny. Anyways, I have to go. i have a script writing class soon, so C ya L8r, and I hopes you update soon.

Keep on going! Great job!

~afk25~

I'm Rick James bitch!!

P.S. your story sucks ass!