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Kd7sov 2005-04-23 ch 5,	abuseWow. Incredible. You have some major talent. Bringing in the monsters and the barrel items was something of a stroke of genius. One thing you didn't make clear: what exactly does Divinity think Sheba "is"?
******* 2005-03-24 ch 5, anon.	abuseWah! I didn't like the ending... it was intresting,though. sniff It made me cry!
Caster of Chaos 2004-12-22 ch 5,	abuseWow. That was dark, and tragic. But that was one of the best stories I've ever read. Really, it was awesome. It almost made me cry, which I almost never do while reading fanfiction. I can't think of a single way to improve it, it was that good. Yay for Omniflyer! Now maybe you can get back to your other fic.
Taiga 2004-12-21 ch 5,	abuseWell... I guess the world is doomed huh? But you have a point, who would have ever thought that simple things like looking into a jar and mind-reading could be considered wrong? Well, as the player, the answer is no, but for the others... Nice story.
Kyarorain 2004-12-21 ch 5,	abuse;_; That is all. ... I half expected you to revive everybody, but the deaths and everything just ties in with the message, doesn't it? Poor everybody... Weyard is surely doomed, there's no such thing as a perfect human. It's shocking, even simple things like Mind Read or 'Isaac checked the jar, Isaac got a Lucky Medal' are a crime... ow...
Caster of Chaos 2004-11-14 ch 4,	abuseWowzorz. I can just FEEL a big battle spanning three and a half chapters coming up. Please don't disappoint me! ^_^ Well, once again, nice job. The Adepts are despairing from the difficult job of keeping Divinity in, who is staying out past her curfew. :) Just kidding, but nice job anyway. Are you ever going to update Wings of Hope? Your everfaithful reviewer, Caster of Chaos.
Joker's Specter 2004-10-30 ch 3,	abuseWell, you know most of my comments...but here's another review for ya. Like I said, I was really surprised when finding out who died. It makes it that much darker, which is what you want, so good job on that. I hope to see the next chapter soon! ~Joker
Caster of Chaos 2004-10-28 ch 3,	abuseWah! You killed Eoleo! (Sobs off in the distance. Poor kid! Other than that, it(once again) was a MAGNIFICENT chapter! If this story isn't on my favorites list, I'm putting it on! Sounds like emotions are running high... The world is disintegrating (sp?) in a way no one thought. The Adepts shall be disbanded, they will die one by one, judged by the cookies they stole, long, long ago... Core: What the crap. Sorry, I'm in a depressed mood. But I bet (0 dollarsm though) you will include SOMEthing like that. -Caster of Chaos
Taiga 2004-10-28 ch 3,	abuseWell... I guess I guessed wrong... didn't see that one coming... Well, I'm looking forwards to the mass destructio of Weyard... I mean, nobody is safe... Evey: Don't worry, she's always like that.
Jibbi 2004-10-25 ch 1,	abuseHey omni! Great Fic! I'm usually...hold on... NEVER in to Golden Sun fics but I really liked this one! And I'm not just saying that because you know me. In Person. Anywayz, great fic! Jibbi
Joker's Specter 2004-10-24 ch 2,	abuseHmm...looks like the Adepts have a new problem on their hands. Very interesting. Everything was detailed enough, and I don't think there were more than one or two errors. One I remember is in the last line of the Isaac/Mia scene, you put "It's" when it should be "It". I have an idea on who's grave Isaac will be visiting. Probably either Kraden's or his father's. I guess I'll find out soon enough. Update soon! ~Joker
Taiga 2004-10-22 ch 2,	abuseAlthough I sadly could see the whole "black and white" view of the world coming from a mile away, this is still a good start. And, I have my suspicions on that grave you were talking about, perhaps a certain old scholar who has the ability to talk too much?
Tetra Seleno 2004-10-21 ch 2,	abuseHmm... an interesting idea, at least. This isn't particularly dark, and Divinity's black-and-white view of the world isn't very impressive. Still, Divinity's "justice" is rather unnerving, and her methods are thought-provoking. I still think this could stand for a little bit darker, since I'm really not feeling the darkness yet. But, this is your first attempt at it, so I'm a little more than certain that you're going to start off slowly and see how it goes. Keep it up, Omniflyer. ~Tetra.
Arowyn 2004-10-21 ch 2,	abuseO_O Wow. Remind me never to ** HER off. Anyway... This is really, REALLY good. I would write a longer review, but...I can't. So keep it up and update soon!
Caster of Chaos 2004-10-20 ch 2,	abuseWow... I'm in awe... This is VERY deep and thought-provoking. I still can't tell if Divinity is gonna be good or bad... You have a SPECIAL way of turning things around. ^o^ Character emotions are written as if you were watching them, perfectly conveyed. 10 outta 10. 11 if I could. In other words, GREAT! -Caster of Chaos (still with mouth wide open)

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