Perfect song. Leave it to Lifehouse:) Leave it to you :)

Omg, That was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Straight Up, you are a very talented writer and I look forward to more of your work. You grasped the storyline without making it boring and fed it to our weary minds. You deserve something speicial for this fic but all I can give you is a Thankyou!

Damn. You are a brilliant writer- I love this! You capture the emotions so well. Keep writing!

Hey Gwen! I was just rereading this chapter and it's a little different then your other chapters. I really like it. I can't pinpoint what makes this chapter different, but it has a very nice flow to it. Great work my boo! -LC

that was awesome

that was beautiful... loved this so much... :)

This was great! I still got one chapter to go, but I LOVE it so far! It is totally becoming one of my favorite stories. Zack, the human cold shower. Why do I get the feeling you don't like him much? *g* It's fantastic!

GOSH, EVERYTIME I READ A FIC ABOUT THIS, I GET A LIL MORE MAD AT MR TITANIC! but still, it will be great when they are reunited! im really gonna miss this fic! i loved it to death, and now your leaving me! you betta work on the air that i breath to make it up girl! lol

this was a really good group of stories.

See, now why couldn't they have shown us all those lovely shippy moments? Thanks for filling in what could be the blanks. I love the way you write Logan's POV.

Aww... I have really enjoyed this series, viewers always wonder what the characters are thinking, and what happens when they don't show you something, and I think it's great that you can imagine so well what might have gone on. So I have a question for you (or maybe two), are you going to add to this series when the second season starts, or are you going to post something all new? Oh well, either way, I'm happy. peace

Oh stars Gwen! I've told you this before, this chapter was extremely hard to read. Logan's pain was so raw and it breaks my heart to see that he's suffering. But, shipper that I am, it was this line that really struck a chord in me -[quote] Cindy had taken temporary residence at his place, with Bling's permission. She had said she couldn't return to the apartment, not yet. [/quote] I've read lots of Logan/Max/Zack/even Krit and Syl angst about loosing Max, but I have yet to see something about Cindy's feelings. You just brushed the tip of the iceberg, and it made me tear up. Great stars! I can only imagine what she's feeling, Max was like a sister to her. They were, no they still are, best friends. Oh lord! Is it summer yet? Awesome work Gwen, I'm honored to be your beta. Gotta blaze! -LadyCallie

Perfect. I love the way these episdoe based fics fill in all the holes to the actual show. I hope you watch next season and do something like this again. The part where she first takes him up to the Space Needle is really nice. I'm into dialogue and I think it was welll written in your story and I felt the episode lacked that scene.

This was sooo sad and sooo beautiful. I love all the details you added to Max and Logan's trip together to the needle. It was wonderful to see the intimacy between them. You do a wonderful job of adding the unspoken emotions to the scenes of the show. Logan's feelings of grief are wonderfully portrayed. And the final scene with Max shows how truly connected they are. This was a wonderful ending to a great fic.

Wonderful. Can't wait to see your take on AJBAC.