Cool - this would make a good story if you chose to continue it. I like it now too though.

WHAT!?!?! BUT MYLES IS ONE OF THE COOLEST PEOPLE ON THE FACE OF THE PLANET!

jon has really overstepped the line this time. grr... he gets on my nerves sometimes...

Oh. I felt a chill after I read that. Very sad, and very powerful. I felt for my favorite characters. Keep writing, that was great.

hi thanks for being one of my favorite reviewers you are the best.
this story is great i think that myles should like i dunno be a traitor or sumthing. i never did like him.
luv Jenny

Wait...this is all? No more? How cruel. You really ought to continue this, as it is incredibly intriguing. Dramatic, too. I can't believe that Jon is having George spy on Myles...wow. Things must be pretty bad for that to happen. You wrote this very well. What was the challenge, by the way?

Say...you can definitely put a copy of Name Meanings up on the Dancing Dove...never been there, but I really think I should start. Sorry it's taken me so long to respond...Haven't checked reviews for that story in forever...guess I should start checking reviews for past stories more frequently.

I'm hoping that you'll end up continuing this...but regardless if you do or don't, this is just an amazing piece!

darn, I loved this...certainly interesting and a refreshingly different storyline.
so there's no more?

hm, I can only think that Jon is summoning Sir Myles of Olau to order HIM to place a loyal spy in George's household?

Hey Lan,
I'm here - you bloody plug-a-holic (even though i read it on the Dove :p)
"He gestured to one of the servants. "Ask Sir Myles of Olau to meet me here, as soon as he can, please."..." - it it Eleni? Because I wouldn't be surprised, from your hints. The last line was ambiguous on purpose! oh well. I shall go torture it out of you on either msn or the dove ... heh

To the other reviewers:
- IT IS A ONESHOT - hence, Lan will not be updating soon because this was a standalone chapter. *mutters* Buttheads...
-Celebrian Lossehelin: You were supposed to conclude that the Baron was George. Lan wrote it perfrectly - the point of the fic is lost if you either don't know who she is, or you know too early.

Love Katrina

Hey, that was good. I know that this was for a chellenge, so most probably a one-shot, but I really think you could make a great story out this! A nice long one...

whoa. intense. not sure what's all about, hopefully there'll be more, but whoa - INtense!

this is something i don't want to happen
civil war with Jon on the throne
but for the sake of your story 'tis great

shadows

OH, interesting. I like your style of writing, though I must say it was a BIT obvious who Jon was talking to. Anyways, I like it. When will you post more?
~Cel

Everyone's so IC...wow. Bravo, bravo, bravo! ^_^

-K.Deamon

Oh, now you've confused me. That last line threw me off. Is it Eleni he doesn't trust, then? Or George? Or Myles? I thought it was Myles, but that last line confused me. Oh... Gah. E-mail me and tell me, so that I feel less stupid... AmethystKnight@ ..thanks!
Love,
~*Amethyst*~

wow, Civil war? That's cool. Update soon. I'm curios to why Jon is so untrusting!

oh! Please update...this looks interesting!