Great story! You style of writing is very poetic and personal, and I loved it. I usually don't like when people shift between first person and third person like that, but in your story it gave good effect. I thought your story overall was quite unique and personal.

It is very good for your first tragic story. Keep up the good work! I would be happy to read more of this from you in the future.

hmm... nice

*tear* I... I loved it, but so sad... Ah, i seem to like these sad stories though. I hope I can read more of your work, happy or sad. :)

I'm speechless... Utter brilliance, I should say... I could totally relate, as if you are telling my story (yeah, except for a few details here and there) hahaha...

I gie it a 5 out of 5

Iliked it a lot!keep up the good work!ja ne!#)_

hey.. Really sorry bout the whole copying person thingy... Just wish I could bash that person's head in... Anyways.. Nice storyline as always, especially since I've always been a KK fan... I'm really hoping that what happened won't stop you from writing... Not just so everyone could finish those that you wrote, so that all the emotions, the words, the things you could never say, do... You'd be able to free somehow..

Sad,

but nicely done.

Nicely written though I think that there has been a inconsistency like how Urumi was born but to heck with that. You've got poetic license to do so and please, keep on writing. _

yo there may be some1 on fiction press copying your story http (:)(/)(/) .com(/) (?)storyid1898201

That was a really great story! It was so sad that Kikuchi didn't see Kanzaki till the last moment! There's a sequel to it?

This is a sad fanfic, it made me cry, poor Kikuchi. :(

Good fanfic, going to read the sequel now._

ohmygosh, it is SO sad...an its very, very wel writen. congrats.

this is so good...

but it's so sad...

i guess the good stories are the sad ones...

wellz...i'll be keeping a watch for your stories

keep writing i love your stories

I lyk it so much but it's so sad!

this is my most favorite story of all the GTO fics in here! nice job! hope you write some stories again soon..